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Shower Shared
Nothing like a shower shared
She stepping in under the stream
I'm soon stripped and fully bare
Behind her in the midst of steam
We take our time with scented soap
Sliding it across our skin
Now slick, one can only hope
To let the thrills truly begin
We balance through several slips
And regain our sense of poise
She kneels, takes me between her lips
The preferred technique that she employs
I come on her exquisite face
Never mind our new hygiene
She rises with amazing grace
My lover, and shining Queen.
She stepping in under the stream
I'm soon stripped and fully bare
Behind her in the midst of steam
We take our time with scented soap
Sliding it across our skin
Now slick, one can only hope
To let the thrills truly begin
We balance through several slips
And regain our sense of poise
She kneels, takes me between her lips
The preferred technique that she employs
I come on her exquisite face
Never mind our new hygiene
She rises with amazing grace
My lover, and shining Queen.
Published 10th Feb 2019
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10th Feb 2019 9:21pm
The last stanza was killer crowfly! The last two lines were best. I did have a giggle as that's my very reaction to such😀
10th Feb 2019 9:27pm
10th Feb 2019 9:33pm
Haha..my reaction to cum on my face is to giggle was what I wanted to relay;)
Anonymous
10th Feb 2019 10:22pm
You took the words out of my imagination...
Again, it's so well written!
Again, it's so well written!
10th Feb 2019 10:35pm
10th Feb 2019 11:58pm
11th Feb 2019 00:02am
11th Feb 2019 00:11am
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Brenda. I can't seem to break the rhyming compulsion. Sometimes it clicks, sometimes it doesn't. I'm delighted this worked for you!
11th Feb 2019 1:10am
Rub_ba_dub_dub. Last paragraph - you are in a perfect place to not make a mess. Nice erotic write. Thoroughly enjoyed.
11th Feb 2019 10:02pm
I try to keep things clean, at least when a shower is available. Delighted you enjoyed this Leo!
Anonymous
11th Feb 2019 2:44am
Oh, lordy! Exquisite imagery! I could almost feel the water. Such sexy words!
11th Feb 2019 10:04pm
I'm glad you felt this, SoulzGirl, or came close. Thank you for the kind response!
11th Feb 2019 10:06pm
11th Feb 2019 11:21am
The best sex always has a hint of laughter to it. The same goes for erotica. Great stuff here.
11th Feb 2019 10:08pm
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Oct 2021 1:45am
12th Feb 2019 8:07am
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