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Rain
Sunset after rain.
Slate clouds in a nitric oxide sky.
Tyres swish on wet streets
and girls laugh, going home from work.
'Twill be alright.
Slate clouds in a nitric oxide sky.
Tyres swish on wet streets
and girls laugh, going home from work.
'Twill be alright.
Published 11th Feb 2019
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11th Feb 2019 3:51pm
That rain is a relief for some after a hard day at work and for the soul.
11th Feb 2019 6:34pm
11th Feb 2019 4:24pm
I love this snapshot; it's such a vivid reminder that life does go on despite the elements of weather - or our own personal storms.
11th Feb 2019 6:36pm
That is the first scrap of poetry that I have published. I am so grateful to you for your approval. Thanks.
11th Feb 2019 6:22pm
11th Feb 2019 6:39pm
Thank you. It is a scrap that I sketched out half a lifetime ago when I lived in London. It sat in a notebook for years until I decided to work it up a bit more.
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13th Feb 2019 3:03am
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