Like a Tornado

nice epigram,though too succint.it seems that your passion is going killing & perilous. go ahead writing such hot but try to detail further.

Hi Ultimatesubliminal,
This is not how I usually write - something different and a bit of fun..
Thankx for your comment though, I have taken it on board. Cheers. Vixen ;-)

Well this is different from your usual.

@Ulitmatesubliminal 'detail further'-- not necessarily for this one, i felt it had its effect:Short, neat and to the point.

[Rubix]

Thankx Rubix,
Just a bit of fun. It was written whilst on my way to work, waiting for the traffic lights to change.
I think that sometimes I tend to waffle on with some of my poems. So I thought that short and neat would be good for a change...Thankx for your post. Cheers. Vixen ;-)

Hotvixen069,

...I know I'm all bent out of shape ; ) Cool!

tornado

Tornado,
Oops, maybe I should have called it "twister"? Although it was your name that popped into my head ;-)  
Short, sweet and straight to the point - not my usual style of writing, but fun. Thankx. Cheers. Vixen ;-)