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Sweetly Shattered
Cradled in the bristles of his hold
her cheek upon his chest,
consoling the doubts that she may have
the antidote to stress
Ensconced and soaked
the slowest glide to put the mind at ease,
before too long, flaring up
to gratify and please
It is not enough to stay so still,
a compliant thirst to shift,
she turns her bottom, arms outstretched
to accord him such a gift
She wails for deeper intimacy
and warns him not to stop,
he stuffs her coated entry
with the fullness of his cock
"Show no mercy", she calls to God
the frenzy puts her on the verge
spasms volt her restless body
to momentarily, hush the urge.
her cheek upon his chest,
consoling the doubts that she may have
the antidote to stress
Ensconced and soaked
the slowest glide to put the mind at ease,
before too long, flaring up
to gratify and please
It is not enough to stay so still,
a compliant thirst to shift,
she turns her bottom, arms outstretched
to accord him such a gift
She wails for deeper intimacy
and warns him not to stop,
he stuffs her coated entry
with the fullness of his cock
"Show no mercy", she calls to God
the frenzy puts her on the verge
spasms volt her restless body
to momentarily, hush the urge.
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Re. Sweetly Shattered
3rd Feb 2019 5:20pm
Re: Re. Sweetly Shattered
3rd Feb 2019 7:26pm
Thanks for the heads up on the duplicate. Some glitch occurred during my edit. This is the correct version. Heady, I like that!
Re. Sweetly Shattered
3rd Feb 2019 5:52pm
Maybe it's just been awhile, but I don't think I've ever seen you to write in this format. Your passion always exudes from your words, but this is a sensual bliss I also don't think I've seen from you. I ❤ everything about it though! Also, your word usage was perfect. This is the best write, you must be in your Muse of sensuality's good graces.;)
""Show no mercy", she calls to God" made me giggle due to my love of portraying sex as a religious act somehow.
""Show no mercy", she calls to God" made me giggle due to my love of portraying sex as a religious act somehow.
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Re: Re. Sweetly Shattered
3rd Feb 2019 7:29pm
Flattered you enjoyed it so much. I hadn't thought it much different than my usual style. Sex is religious, isn't it? Closest I've ever came to total contentment.
Re: Re. Sweetly Shattered
3rd Feb 2019 10:14pm
Indeed it is that sacred!! This was just different looking from the outside. I can't explain, just deeper. The undertone of healing spoke some words to me that go perfect with a picture saved forever..thanks buddy!!
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Re: Re. Sweetly Shattered
3rd Feb 2019 11:41pm
Happy to evoke such a picture. The undertone of healing. What a wonderful way to put it.
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3rd Feb 2019 9:17pm
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Re: Re. Sweetly Shattered
3rd Feb 2019 9:41pm
That is funny! Perhaps a continuation is needed to further abate such cravings.
Re. Sweetly Shattered
4th Feb 2019 00:59am
dearest Tender One damn it man
you got me all creamy reading this...
delicious erotic, hot sizzling read...
love Brenda 💋
you got me all creamy reading this...
delicious erotic, hot sizzling read...
love Brenda 💋
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4th Feb 2019 4:04am
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4th Feb 2019 3:46pm
Re. Sweetly Shattered
5th Feb 2019 12:35pm
Strong ... relentless erotica ... short lines sustain the cadence and flow ... bravo Tenderloin ...
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5th Feb 2019 3:37pm