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5th Feb 2019 12:12pm
This is a very vivid haiku - it's the kind that leaves you in silence, contemplating the imagery.
6th Feb 2019 3:42am
Ahavati, there you go again! Thank you. I am just testing my feet in haiku, a form with which I am unaccustomed. Please feel free to give me possible improvement comments, as well.
