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Transcendent
Amidst the turbulent tides of a violent sea; slick ocean dew beneath her, still --- she's anchored like a rock
Through rocking waves; she's cloaked in strength and firmly planted
Her scars are ornamental proof of war; worn proudly and accentuated with an adornment of ink
As heavy mists of brutal force rain and crash upon her; she breathes in its crisp scent of renewal
From lips splashed by it's salty essence; her faith resounds with a vengeance ---- "Fuck You", bellows as she blows forth a sated kiss
From battles conquered, were her wings earned and created;
forever, will she transcend amidst the turbulent tides of a violent sea
Published 29th Jan 2019
| Edited 5th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2019 6:06pm
"fuck you"
as she blows forth a sated kiss
From battles won, were her wings earned and created;
forever will she transcend amidst the turbulent tides of a violent sea"
There is so much fierce strength in these words. To stand defiant and come out the other side, scarred and beautiful...and with such grace to grow and fly away. Brava!
...Willow
as she blows forth a sated kiss
From battles won, were her wings earned and created;
forever will she transcend amidst the turbulent tides of a violent sea"
There is so much fierce strength in these words. To stand defiant and come out the other side, scarred and beautiful...and with such grace to grow and fly away. Brava!
...Willow
29th Jan 2019 8:54pm
Oh do I thank you dearly, Willow!! This one was a special write as I'm truly trying to embrace life for what it is. Also an ode to the many times when life has stomped me, healthwise and getting up each time to still kick ass!;)
Anonymous
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29th Jan 2019 6:35pm
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29th Jan 2019 9:07pm
Thank you. I appreciate the depth you put forth in commentary. It means a lot. I'm definitely the resilient girl put through life's hoops. I love having the chance to throw in a refrain. I did it more so with my old prose.
29th Jan 2019 9:07pm
Thank you. I appreciate the depth you put forth in commentary. It means a lot. I'm definitely the resilient girl put through life's hoops. I love having the chance to throw in a refrain. I did it more so with my old prose.
Anonymous
29th Jan 2019 10:45pm
Pandora,
Another great write full of pain, and strength, and beautiful words to make it so lovely.
Wonderful.
Matthew.
Another great write full of pain, and strength, and beautiful words to make it so lovely.
Wonderful.
Matthew.
29th Jan 2019 11:08pm
Thank you, my dear. The girl once hooked on erotica is now hooked on purging feelings, it seems. I'm growing up at 39!!!😅☺
Anonymous
30th Jan 2019 3:14am
Lol.
Feelings are a beautiful thing to write about, especially the way you do it.
Matthew.
Feelings are a beautiful thing to write about, especially the way you do it.
Matthew.
30th Jan 2019 3:59am
I so agree that scars are ornaments. You poetically handle the subject with astute reflection and I see bravery in this spill.
30th Jan 2019 5:15am
They really are and I'm glad you appreciated it. I used to cringe at purging my feelings and now I'm watching the erotica slip. I guess I need balance as all writers should.
30th Jan 2019 11:17am
30th Jan 2019 9:09pm
I like the power behind your words and how the narrator refuses to be put down. This is a splendid poem, and I congratulate you on a job well done.
31st Jan 2019 3:05am
Thank you one last time, my sweet friend. This is all ME as well, I just seem to write best in second person. Regardless, it is cathartic. Thank you for dredging through my pieces to catch up and by leaving such lovely comments.
Anonymous
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3rd Feb 2019 6:48pm
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3rd Feb 2019 10:28pm
Anonymous
10th Feb 2019 7:29pm
love the inner resolve expressed in this vibe
your artistry is off the chain!!!
your artistry is off the chain!!!
10th Feb 2019 7:46pm
Thank you. I really appreciate it! This girl isn't feeling too transcendent today so the irony of your comment on this piece feels like a reminder.;)
