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Searching
I walk amongst the stones,
These pebbles have witnessed an ageing,
Years of change and growth,
Confusion, stress,
Love and angst.
I visit here to be alone,
It is home for me,
A sanctuary of hope,
Love lost and love gained,
And yet I still feel the same.
I search for peace here,
I wait for returns
Which never appear,
I relish in memories,
Years gone by,
Stages within a life,
All interlaced within this tapestry.
This place is home,
To my inner soul,
All that I am
All that I was,
Stands here today,
Continuing the search.
These pebbles have witnessed an ageing,
Years of change and growth,
Confusion, stress,
Love and angst.
I visit here to be alone,
It is home for me,
A sanctuary of hope,
Love lost and love gained,
And yet I still feel the same.
I search for peace here,
I wait for returns
Which never appear,
I relish in memories,
Years gone by,
Stages within a life,
All interlaced within this tapestry.
This place is home,
To my inner soul,
All that I am
All that I was,
Stands here today,
Continuing the search.
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Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 1:37pm
a very deeply self-reflective write
that eternal quest we are all on...
excellent expression...
love Brenda ❤
that eternal quest we are all on...
excellent expression...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 1:41pm
Thank you Brenda for your kind words.
Just starting out in publishing these somewhere other than my notepad so it's really great to get some kind feedback.
Love, Natalie.
Just starting out in publishing these somewhere other than my notepad so it's really great to get some kind feedback.
Love, Natalie.
Re: Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 1:43pm
oh wonderful dearest Natalie you will love it here I think but be warned this place is addictive...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 3:16pm
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28th Jan 2019 4:20pm
Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 6:46pm
You have spilled a memory for me.......
strolling through a zen Garden
eventually sitting in a half-lotus position to meditate.............serene and peace
Beautiful spill
strolling through a zen Garden
eventually sitting in a half-lotus position to meditate.............serene and peace
Beautiful spill
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Re: Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 7:08pm
Thank You! A joy to know I have have released a happy memory for you. That is the aim of anything I write and publish here: to firstly express the emotion and to resonate with others. Glad you enjoyed :)
Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 10:21pm
An exquisitely expressed piece cobalt
Really enjoyed this serene spill👏
The ending is wonderful
"This place is home,
To my inner soul,
All that I am
All that I was,
Stands here today,
Continuing the search."
A great write well done!
Really enjoyed this serene spill👏
The ending is wonderful
"This place is home,
To my inner soul,
All that I am
All that I was,
Stands here today,
Continuing the search."
A great write well done!
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Re: Re. Searching
28th Jan 2019 10:33pm
Thank you very much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it , thanks for your kind words :)
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Re. Searching
31st Jan 2019 5:00pm
Re. Searching
31st Jan 2019 6:34pm
Cobalt, to whatever unknowns your journey may take you, it seems you find a home. A fascinating introspective piece....
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