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Our watery nature
Soon into the mental hyperbolic funnel
Their soul pulsating in doubled helix
Turbulence creates a stable structure
In forming out of our swirling chaos,
Deep pattern of natural self-organization
To understand the spirit and then copy
And so reaching this anomaly state
Going against a flow of current doctrine,
A sibylline density of a higher resistance
As cryptic waters then begin to pull
With guide veins diverting to a middle
The winding river in probing space curve,
Metaphysical stream rotating to its bed
In bends lay the furies to grind up stone
A flowing generator with fords in between
To regulate thru secret unto our center,
Mystic fountain of ripples and vortices
An abstruse draw away from our banks
Different depths with changing velocities
Restores the original swinging movement,
As this life floods bringing a convex plum
Swelling inward as we rise to all levels
Then so correcting to a concave profile
Only to realize the extent of our edges.
Published 28th Jan 2019
| Edited 3rd Feb 2019
Author's Note
"A dreamer is one who can only find their way by moonlight and their punishment is that they see the dawn before the rest of the world" - Oscar Wilde
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28th Jan 2019 10:13pm
29th Jan 2019 00:01am
Thank you most graciously for the humbling comment... I really appreciate the read...concentrating on the water dimension was trippy, now that I realize...
Jeff
Jeff
29th Jan 2019 5:59am
Wonderful poetry, man! Incredible flow, and splendid imagery! Just awesome :)
Thanks for sharing, Jeff!
Thanks for sharing, Jeff!
29th Jan 2019 6:14am
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3rd Feb 2019 9:21am
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3rd Feb 2019 9:32am
I am honored by the addition and gracious comment...Thank you very much for the read...
Jeff
Jeff
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2019 9:58am
Got thoughts flowing this morning. So very much is held in the depths...
3rd Feb 2019 10:12am
Thank you, my dear...we each plunge into our own understanding...
Love always,
Jeff
Love always,
Jeff
3rd Feb 2019 4:56pm
"cryptic waters" ... wonderful ... "lay the furies to grind up stones" ... marvelous ... the last two lines are amazing ...
3rd Feb 2019 5:02pm
Thank you, my dear Soledad...this one seemed to not need a ryhming scheme...as it flowed in between thoughts...
Love
B
Love
B
Anonymous
4th Feb 2019 1:31am
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In physical geometry, it is the Torus...in sacred geometry, it is the continuous creation model..the self-embedded tree of life...waters above, waters below...an orphic egg around the axis mundi...the stem and flower blossom tetra helix column represented in the macro as the universe and the fractal micro as our DNA...
The energy field you referenced is the double tetrahedron that our consciousness forms...a Merkaba from which our physical body is projected....both unending or in mystical Hebrew the Eyn-Sof ...
As far as chaos magic....that is the human consciousness affecting the immediate world around us...due to the extreme power we generate...it is our lot in life to choose creative forms and not destructive chaotic forms...which formulate into selfishness and in turn suffering of others...against spiritual and natural law...
As a poet, you are a creative force...loved by the Godhead.
Thank you most graciously for your comment and loving support,
Jeff
The energy field you referenced is the double tetrahedron that our consciousness forms...a Merkaba from which our physical body is projected....both unending or in mystical Hebrew the Eyn-Sof ...
As far as chaos magic....that is the human consciousness affecting the immediate world around us...due to the extreme power we generate...it is our lot in life to choose creative forms and not destructive chaotic forms...which formulate into selfishness and in turn suffering of others...against spiritual and natural law...
As a poet, you are a creative force...loved by the Godhead.
Thank you most graciously for your comment and loving support,
Jeff
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4th Feb 2019 11:56am
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