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Gifted
Your presence in my days
has grown to be my present;
I desire to uncover a way
to discover how to
fellowship more with You.
Now and then
my spills sound like
syncopation or void
when I’m around You.
I might become verbose
or stutter beyond
comprehension.
Try not to be morose
as it’s just my nerves
and anticipation
due to Your presence.
I want to be Your Friend
caring, listening and kind
trying to understand
fears and pain You try
to leave behind.
Your presence in my life
has potential
to grow
to maturate
beyond a gift.
Published 21st Jan 2019
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Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 7:06pm
Incredibly beautifully written. Some friendships are just such magic.
21st Jan 2019 7:14pm
Yes they are and sometimes when we first meet someone
we know immediately
& this in itself is magick
we know immediately
& this in itself is magick
Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 7:14pm
So agree with you.
Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 7:19pm
Tallen,
What great, honest, heartfelt spillage.
You know, I don't think anyone who knows you, and your incredible passion, and love of people, isn't frightened by you.
Excellent write, my friend!
MZ.
What great, honest, heartfelt spillage.
You know, I don't think anyone who knows you, and your incredible passion, and love of people, isn't frightened by you.
Excellent write, my friend!
MZ.
21st Jan 2019 8:31pm
an acute observation on Your part, Brother
I make Friends easily and it doesn't matter the gender, age, race, smarts.........
At my last job in California,
I received 2 "Going away" parties:
1 from the store minions (like me) & 1 from the mgrs (i was the only minion there). One supervisor told me (through her tears) she was super happy she got to meet and know me.
One coworker said she wished she could have my heart and spirit because even the people that didn't like, liked me. Now that IS SOMETHING.
Anyways,
I appreciate You and Your kind shares.
I make Friends easily and it doesn't matter the gender, age, race, smarts.........
At my last job in California,
I received 2 "Going away" parties:
1 from the store minions (like me) & 1 from the mgrs (i was the only minion there). One supervisor told me (through her tears) she was super happy she got to meet and know me.
One coworker said she wished she could have my heart and spirit because even the people that didn't like, liked me. Now that IS SOMETHING.
Anyways,
I appreciate You and Your kind shares.
21st Jan 2019 8:59pm
My first thought was join a bowling league with them...a sport eases any anxiety ... terrific poem Tallen
21st Jan 2019 9:10pm
lol -- You made me Grin -- thank You
I used to be in a bowling league while stationed at Kadena Air Base, Okinawa, Japan. Every time we were up against a Japanese or Okinawan team they would tell us that EVERY FRAME is a BEER FRAME!!! We struggled to win those matches.........lol (You caused me to dredge up this memory)
appreciate You sharing with me
I used to be in a bowling league while stationed at Kadena Air Base, Okinawa, Japan. Every time we were up against a Japanese or Okinawan team they would tell us that EVERY FRAME is a BEER FRAME!!! We struggled to win those matches.........lol (You caused me to dredge up this memory)
appreciate You sharing with me
23rd Jan 2019 5:12am
very beautiful Tallen, this world could surely used more of your prototype
23rd Jan 2019 5:46am
