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Mirror Image
He waits for the deciding push
A final setback in his life
Efforts made, but what's the point?
He raises his keenest knife
He recalls his past mistakes
The treachery, and negligence
Death, he feels, would be proud
To remove this cause for pestilence
He positions the sharpened blade
To a vein stretching on his throat
But in the mirror he sees his face
Lacking tears, creased with a gloat
He realizes that there's more
So much to do before he goes
The reflection does somewhat agree
He's doomed to life, not graveyard rows.
A final setback in his life
Efforts made, but what's the point?
He raises his keenest knife
He recalls his past mistakes
The treachery, and negligence
Death, he feels, would be proud
To remove this cause for pestilence
He positions the sharpened blade
To a vein stretching on his throat
But in the mirror he sees his face
Lacking tears, creased with a gloat
He realizes that there's more
So much to do before he goes
The reflection does somewhat agree
He's doomed to life, not graveyard rows.
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Re. Mirror Image
Anonymous
20th Jan 2019 10:32pm
How many times we look at our reflection and stop just when you are about to give in and say I've had it. Very true your words, my friend and very heart felt. J

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20th Jan 2019 11:12pm
Thank you J. I wasn't in the sunniest mood when I wrote this. You just gave me a boost. Thanks again...
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Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 3:44am
Oh, this was enough words for me to feel an incredible ache! I hate that those thoughts even existed in your mind in the first place. May I just hold out my arms and just embrace you, the biggest soul hug to you, Crowfly.

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22nd Jan 2019 10:23pm
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22nd Jan 2019 10:27pm
Sorry to hear that you've had the same sensation, the self-destructive inclination. Still, I'm glad I'm not alone. Thank you Brad!
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22nd Jan 2019 00:25am
This made me happy to read about the man in the mirror. I am glad he is sticking around.
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22nd Jan 2019 10:29pm
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2019 8:48pm
The eternal struggle of those of us who are lost, disoriented, and hurt. I don't typically enjoy hope but...............you made me feel it.

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22nd Jan 2019 10:31pm
Thanks KillHope. Your user name suggests a pessimist. Glad to instill some hope.
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23rd Jan 2019 4:39pm
Amazing pace and speed. Unfortunate to be able to say that I have been there, but this poem was able to recall my reason for being able to leave.
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