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Dark Tapestry
The double doors are closed; the day is done;
The footfalls fade away and darkness drifts
From innocence to harsher forms of fun
On which a dominant often insists;
The breathy hiss of gasping is the sound
That no one else will hear: the silent tread
Of master mounting stairs; prefaces pound
Of adult copulation: that's our thread;
A fucking, forceful, filling will be fine
For this submissive as an acolyte;
You always rule the roost, you know when time
Is called, then I surrender until night
Is ended by the daylight as this warm,
Dark tapestry is broken by the dawn...
The footfalls fade away and darkness drifts
From innocence to harsher forms of fun
On which a dominant often insists;
The breathy hiss of gasping is the sound
That no one else will hear: the silent tread
Of master mounting stairs; prefaces pound
Of adult copulation: that's our thread;
A fucking, forceful, filling will be fine
For this submissive as an acolyte;
You always rule the roost, you know when time
Is called, then I surrender until night
Is ended by the daylight as this warm,
Dark tapestry is broken by the dawn...
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Re. Dark Tapestry
19th Jan 2019 1:12am
The dominant/submissive theme makes a sublime dark tapestry. As usual, your style is one of a kind.
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19th Jan 2019 11:05am
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19th Jan 2019 10:55am
Lust flies in the face of this pet
When there are needs to be met;
It's not out of place
For her master to grace
Her face with the viscous and wet.
When there are needs to be met;
It's not out of place
For her master to grace
Her face with the viscous and wet.
Re. Dark Tapestry
19th Jan 2019 1:50am
Very erotic imagery of submissive waiting for her master. Passion strongly represented in your ink here dear. 😉💐
Loved it very much.😊
Wolfman🐺
Loved it very much.😊
Wolfman🐺
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19th Jan 2019 11:01am
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19th Jan 2019 11:36pm
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20th Jan 2019 00:02am
I have found men tend to prefer not having to wait.; but that may just be me
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20th Jan 2019 00:26am
You are correct most men want it fast and quick. They seek their own satisfaction first. Men who understand foreplay passion romance enjoy the wait for all the pleasure to be given and taken all night long to making of love.💐😉
As the song " Waiting on a Woman" says it very poetically.🌹
Wolfman🐺
As the song " Waiting on a Woman" says it very poetically.🌹
Wolfman🐺
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20th Jan 2019 00:27am
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20th Jan 2019 00:43am
Brad Paisley sings it my lady here it is...💐
https://youtu.be/dwp8jtP210c
Enjoy😊🌹
Wolfman🐺
https://youtu.be/dwp8jtP210c
Enjoy😊🌹
Wolfman🐺
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20th Jan 2019 00:44am
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19th Jan 2019 3:10am
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Re. Dark Tapestry
19th Jan 2019 3:33am
Your work always amazes me. It's stunning. The flow adds the flair. I'm all new to poetic form. Is this yours alone or a technical one? I'm always wishing to learn.;)
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19th Jan 2019 10:52am
It's shakesperian sonnet in iambic pentameter rhyme scheme - abab cdcd efef gg. 10 syllables a verse with appropriate balanced stresses (I am useless at those - must read up more). I write mostly in sonnet form. The content is my own.
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Ah... The whole sonnet then. I've read up but may come to you with questions if you don't mind. I know the content is of your own making and it's gorgeous!!
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