Star-cross'd lovers

I enjoyed your poem.  I liked the flow of it and enjoyed the story you told.  Nicely stated....xo

Thank you Karen, for stopping by and your kind comments. Life and love plays funny tricks sometimes but as a lovely poetess in DU once told me; 'we love who we love'

Great story to this write, interesting piece.

Thanks Rob; Appreciate your comment but 'interesting'? please explain. :)

Apologies, it was not said as a criticism. Interesting in regards to the love triangle aspect and the on going emotions yet putting it aside in the present in which the poem is written. An interesting look at A relationship dynamic with which I am unfamiliar 😊, certainly no offence was intended.

Hi Rob - and absolutely none taken. :) I am just fascinated by different peoples takes on 'relationships' and the ideas behind one woman - one man.  I find myself surrounded by male - male and female - female and now more recently male and female groups so it has been 'interesting' :-)

Ha, glad you were not offended, relationships of all shapes and forms are 'Interesting'. Again - I enjoyed the write 😊.

A wonderful story, really enjoyed it.

You are very welcome my dearest Liah. An on-going and evolving 'sit-com' which may end as either a tragedy or a farce; who knows. Dx