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Feelings Of Excitement
Heart beats so fast
The excitement builds
Wanting the feeling to last
Anticipation will be filled
I feel very excited
Don't want it to stop
My body feels ignited
My anxiety starts to drop
I swallow very fast
My eyes twinkle
I'm having a blast
I softly start to giggle
In the end it was a rush
It was what I hoped for
My face is a bit flushed
I want to do it some more
The excitement builds
Wanting the feeling to last
Anticipation will be filled
I feel very excited
Don't want it to stop
My body feels ignited
My anxiety starts to drop
I swallow very fast
My eyes twinkle
I'm having a blast
I softly start to giggle
In the end it was a rush
It was what I hoped for
My face is a bit flushed
I want to do it some more
Published 16th Jan 2019
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16th Jan 2019 7:06pm
16th Jan 2019 7:09pm
16th Jan 2019 7:07pm
Love the excited pace of this but what were you excited about? I wanted that final killer verse.
16th Jan 2019 7:09pm
I was just showing how one feels with being excited. It really isn't about anything. Thank you for reading and commenting...xo
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16th Jan 2019 8:06pm
16th Jan 2019 9:17pm
Really great piece enjoyed the read!👏
Love these lines,
"My body feels ignited
My anxiety starts to drop"
A fabulous feeling that is for sure👌
Excellent spill i dig!👏
Love these lines,
"My body feels ignited
My anxiety starts to drop"
A fabulous feeling that is for sure👌
Excellent spill i dig!👏
17th Jan 2019 6:17pm
16th Jan 2019 11:15pm
Loved it very much Karen. You truly brought out the excitement both in WORDS, pace and imagery, keep it going you are poetess by all rights.😊🌺
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
17th Jan 2019 6:18pm
Anonymous
17th Jan 2019 6:16pm
Very nice, Mysteria.
You express yourself beautifully in your poems.
Matthew.
You express yourself beautifully in your poems.
Matthew.
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