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Writing
Thoughts of you
Filling my head
Fuelling my passion
Length in my hand
Feeling it’s weight
Gripping firm
I start teasing
My movements slow
As I start
Motion builds
As my excitement grows
At what I do
Hand moving faster
And faster
Frantic in need
Eyes almost closed
Lips parted
As the moment comes
My final release
My satisfaction
My completed art
I take in the sight
Of all this ink
That scrawls my page.
Filling my head
Fuelling my passion
Length in my hand
Feeling it’s weight
Gripping firm
I start teasing
My movements slow
As I start
Motion builds
As my excitement grows
At what I do
Hand moving faster
And faster
Frantic in need
Eyes almost closed
Lips parted
As the moment comes
My final release
My satisfaction
My completed art
I take in the sight
Of all this ink
That scrawls my page.
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2019 7:27pm
Wow...bloody wow! Brilliant imagery here!
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14th Jan 2019 7:34pm
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2019 7:39pm
Not at all. 🤗
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14th Jan 2019 11:05pm
I love this!! Crass? Absolutely not, you're on Lusts sacred ground around here though. *giggles*
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15th Jan 2019 5:58am
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15th Jan 2019 1:33am
Well, proof the pen is mightier than the "Sword"! : )
Well done how you paralleled self pleasure with writing. That was impressive.
Well done how you paralleled self pleasure with writing. That was impressive.
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15th Jan 2019 5:59am
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15th Jan 2019 10:23am
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15th Jan 2019 10:32am
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Sounds so much like my own writing practice, only mine is more mundane. Wish I had your inspiration. You hit home with this one Rjm.
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16th Jan 2019 8:07am
Thank you Crowfly, I find your words - both comments and poems - are always inspired.