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Tender and Devout
Quelled in her waters deep and divine: Melodious did their sonance
sing.
Tender and devout; sacred was their ebb and flow.
As his rhapsody and cadence within her cavern flowed:
Cherished was his sweet
christening.
Tender and devout; sacred was now his seed in sow.
Glory then be given in bellowing praise; quelled in her waters
deep and divine.
sing.
Tender and devout; sacred was their ebb and flow.
As his rhapsody and cadence within her cavern flowed:
Cherished was his sweet
christening.
Tender and devout; sacred was now his seed in sow.
Glory then be given in bellowing praise; quelled in her waters
deep and divine.
Published 14th Jan 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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14th Jan 2019 1:10am
Wow so sensual imagery...😊
Very intoxicating to the mind...😉
loved it very much my dear💐😊
Wolfman...🐺🌹
Very intoxicating to the mind...😉
loved it very much my dear💐😊
Wolfman...🐺🌹
14th Jan 2019 10:09pm
Thank you so very much, dear friend. I'm so blessed to have such great support!!
14th Jan 2019 1:56am
Enjoyed reading this. It had a melodic flow and biblical story telling sense to it.
14th Jan 2019 10:11pm
Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed just what I intended..the flow. As to the biblical feeling, I tend to write of sex like a religious experience here lately. *blushes *
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14th Jan 2019 2:05am
Two of my favourite words sensually weaved into the title and providing a lovely refrain.
14th Jan 2019 10:14pm
Thank you, sweet friend. If I served you two of your favorite words alone , then it was my pleasure!!
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14th Jan 2019 10:18pm
Thank you, Rjm..I'm humbled by your words and especially your add. I do believe you're the master of sensuality at DUP, without a doubt!!
14th Jan 2019 5:28pm
14th Jan 2019 10:26pm
Thank you. It's such a pleasure to see a new face here for me as well!!☺
14th Jan 2019 5:55pm
14th Jan 2019 10:28pm
I'm so glad you enjoyed that line and it's nice to see a new face in my comments. Thank you for the lovely comment about my face as well.
14th Jan 2019 10:31pm
Glad you appreciated my compliment on yoir face. I actually had you confused with a different person and would not normally have gone there in my first comment with you.
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