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Quiet Intercourse
Out of the void and empty silence. . .
Mom nature gave birth to another Baby ----
a kawaii* brand new dawn.
As I strolled through the brisk air
through Gaia’s enchanted Forest
I came upon a clearing.
Sparkling waters painted the backdrop
whisper of winds and songs of birds set
the sound for romanticism.
I breathed deep, deeply
refreshingly even.
Hand in hand with Baby dawn
I spied a tall and slender fawn.
Shrugging off butterflies tickling
we came to sit upon the lawn
side by side as one.
Speaking only with our senses
with an occasional touch
our intercourse led us
to an understanding
and we knew. . .
thankful.
Published 4th Jan 2019
Author's Note
Kawaii (かわいい,( lovable", "cute", or "adorable")
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 10:12pm
Tallen,
What fantastic wording. Really beautiful, my friend.
MZ.
What fantastic wording. Really beautiful, my friend.
MZ.
4th Jan 2019 10:15pm
Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 10:18pm
I don't know how you do it, my friend. You put out poems like a madman, yet you write so well.
MZ.
MZ.
4th Jan 2019 10:23pm
I dream a lot and my dreaming world often connects with my conscious world and
my mind never stops. That, and I am a super
sensitive sentient being. I used to cry every day, now I cry only 3 or more times a week ----i am getting better.
I have to write what I see, what I feel, what i dreamed
because if I don't it will explode out of me in another way (usually in a negative way).
I slept one hour last night; thank the universe I slept for nearly 8 hrs the night before.
my mind never stops. That, and I am a super
sensitive sentient being. I used to cry every day, now I cry only 3 or more times a week ----i am getting better.
I have to write what I see, what I feel, what i dreamed
because if I don't it will explode out of me in another way (usually in a negative way).
I slept one hour last night; thank the universe I slept for nearly 8 hrs the night before.
Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 10:27pm
Well, it's awesome. I wish I could put all my dreams and thoughts into poem form.
You're definitely an intense, unique individual, which is why we like you. Normal is boring...not that you're not normal, but you're different normal, if that makes sense(if it does, tell me what I was saying, please).
You're cool TA.
MZ.
You're definitely an intense, unique individual, which is why we like you. Normal is boring...not that you're not normal, but you're different normal, if that makes sense(if it does, tell me what I was saying, please).
You're cool TA.
MZ.
