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I'll drive you all night long
What am I?
I'm your sweetest dream
You never want to let go
I'm your worst nightmare
Never letting you leave
Lust is a dangerous thing boy.
It makes your sight blurry
And your mind feels fuzzy
Left are only the instincts.
Pale hands, lingering my skin
Lips, trembling
Heavy breaths, lips parted.
I'm going to drive you all night
Do not think
Turn off your thoughts
Turn on your fantasies
Baby, I'm all yours.
I'm your sweetest dream
You never want to let go
I'm your worst nightmare
Never letting you leave
Lust is a dangerous thing boy.
It makes your sight blurry
And your mind feels fuzzy
Left are only the instincts.
Pale hands, lingering my skin
Lips, trembling
Heavy breaths, lips parted.
I'm going to drive you all night
Do not think
Turn off your thoughts
Turn on your fantasies
Baby, I'm all yours.
Published 30th Dec 2009
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11th Jan 2010 9:51pm
wow i like it!!!!1 love the begining "What am I?
I'm your sweetest dream
You never want to let go
I'm your worst nightmare
Never letting you leave" sounds so good keep it up
I'm your sweetest dream
You never want to let go
I'm your worst nightmare
Never letting you leave" sounds so good keep it up
13th Jan 2010 7:16pm
9th Apr 2010 5:16pm
still sounds great its so lovely like making love and just no thoughts jsut you and that one special person i love it. whats been happening here in DU its like no more comments in peoples work. people need comments its part of what makes you a great poet to know that other people love your work that you put time into.
10th Apr 2010 10:31am
18th Aug 2010 5:43pm
i thought u were talkin to me there for a sec.. wow.. i love it... its wierd cuz i have a special connection with your writing. its cool
25th Aug 2010 12:16pm
Wauw, thanks sweetheart<3 Feel free to read it all if you please^^
And who knows, maybe I was talking to you?
