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Sliding slowly from the rhyme
The rhythm something else
My muse won't have it
So she says
So I just might comply
But it's a struggle to convert
And end the fucking rhyme
Yet some lines are short
And hopefully
Get right to the point
I take my muse
And strap her down
Tell her that I'm in charge
She can take a flying flock
If she resists at all
I stick my cock
Within her mouth
And slide between her lips
Her instructions are then garbled
Incoherent in the night
I believe she sees my point
About adherence to my style
And I see the shining in her eyes
Some vague luminosity
But no sign of any tears.
The rhythm something else
My muse won't have it
So she says
So I just might comply
But it's a struggle to convert
And end the fucking rhyme
Yet some lines are short
And hopefully
Get right to the point
I take my muse
And strap her down
Tell her that I'm in charge
She can take a flying flock
If she resists at all
I stick my cock
Within her mouth
And slide between her lips
Her instructions are then garbled
Incoherent in the night
I believe she sees my point
About adherence to my style
And I see the shining in her eyes
Some vague luminosity
But no sign of any tears.
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4th Jan 2019 8:16pm
Thank you Ang. I'm usually an inveterate rhymer, but thought I'd mix it up this time.
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4th Jan 2019 9:15pm
How clever ... you sure told your muse a thing or two ... got me a little hot in the process ...
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4th Jan 2019 9:41pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 9:33pm
Bloody brilliant. A very lucky muse!

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Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 9:46pm
I love your work...

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Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 10:39pm
Sometimes our muse can be such a whore! Some rough treatment can bring her down but, as you say, never break her. Well written my friend. J

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5th Jan 2019 10:03am
It's amazing what inspiration we can squeeze from our muses... Enjoyed this piece.
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6th Jan 2019 2:30pm
dearest Sir Crow very titillating
bringing your muse into submission hot...
love Brenda 💕
bringing your muse into submission hot...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2019 2:26am
If you didn't have a muse.... the poems would not know what to become! Provocative! :))

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