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Carousel
To his hearts tender vessel:
His angel of compassion and purity.
Cherished as she
sates at the gates of sweet loves passion and mercy with grace abound.
An anchor of hope and faith - a revelry
to treasure.
To the flesh and bones of
his carnal being:
His queen of iniquity - making avail of
herself to savage depravity and all
wanton perversions.
Beautifully surrendered and exploited as a musing in the sanctity and
name of pleasure.
A carousel of his most favored delectations: Her embodiment in any of her manifestations
Her lusts sweet delight in all provocations : The finest of drunken and gluttoned sensations.
"I like my body when it is with your body"
- EE Cummings
His angel of compassion and purity.
Cherished as she
sates at the gates of sweet loves passion and mercy with grace abound.
An anchor of hope and faith - a revelry
to treasure.
To the flesh and bones of
his carnal being:
His queen of iniquity - making avail of
herself to savage depravity and all
wanton perversions.
Beautifully surrendered and exploited as a musing in the sanctity and
name of pleasure.
A carousel of his most favored delectations: Her embodiment in any of her manifestations
Her lusts sweet delight in all provocations : The finest of drunken and gluttoned sensations.
"I like my body when it is with your body"
- EE Cummings
Published 3rd Jan 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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3rd Jan 2019 5:20am
3rd Jan 2019 5:26am
3rd Jan 2019 7:14am
24th Jan 2019 6:56pm
Thank you, Miss Velvet. I'm so very humbled by your endearing comment love.
3rd Jan 2019 9:06am
Loved the flow and depth. Imagery touches the mind greatly.💐
Beautiful ink Pandora.😊🌺🐺
Beautiful ink Pandora.😊🌺🐺
Thank you, Wolfman. I'm so very glad it could provoke some imagery of naughty and nice. I was worried about the flow. You are a dear for humbling me with an add as well.
24th Jan 2019 11:36pm
You are very welcome, Pandora. Yes had even amount of naughty and nice to make a wonderful ink. Had to add to my RL, to beautiful to let go. Your flow was like soft wind across a plateau of imagery.🌹😁
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
24th Jan 2019 11:38pm
"flow was like soft wind across a plateau of imagery" sounds like poetry itself;)
24th Jan 2019 11:55pm
You have a very strong way of inspiring me, My dear friend Pandora...😁🌷
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
3rd Jan 2019 11:35am
Love the fantasy evoked in this:
"His queen of iniquity - making avail of
herself to savage depravity and all
wanton perversions"
Another great write, my friend.
"His queen of iniquity - making avail of
herself to savage depravity and all
wanton perversions"
Another great write, my friend.
24th Jan 2019 7:01pm
Thank you, T. I apologize for not catching anyones comments when posted. I loved that line myself. I just had to play on the crossroads where nice meets naughty. A girl should be both!;)
3rd Jan 2019 5:38pm
Brava Pandora! This could bring to life the boring bench seat on a carousel :) Or on a horse if so gymnastically inclined :D. And oh that slow rise and fall. Your erotica is so tantalizing and beautifully sensual.
24th Jan 2019 7:05pm
You know I treasure your comments, dear friend. I'm so grateful you recognize my erotica for the very intentions I hope to capture. I sure do hope you are writing too;)
3rd Jan 2019 7:23pm
24th Jan 2019 7:07pm
Thank you, Rjm. I'm just now getting caught up on comments from this old write. Oops. I miss your writing and do hope your muse is treating you well.
4th Jan 2019 5:06am
Such beauty in this Pandora. My mind took it into the realm of fantasy. Two angles dancing in the clouds, savoring delights in the open.
Perhaps I’ve been reading too many fantasy books as of late.
Perhaps I’ve been reading too many fantasy books as of late.
24th Jan 2019 7:11pm
Thank you, sweet Bonzi. I sure hope it wasn't from reading too much fantasy. I wanted the naughty and nice to both dance in your head!
I'm just now catching these comments here. I haven't seen you since your socks tribute. I do hope you're not stuck in the infliction of writer's block. Hurry back!
I'm just now catching these comments here. I haven't seen you since your socks tribute. I do hope you're not stuck in the infliction of writer's block. Hurry back!
24th Jan 2019 11:52pm
No, not stuck. I’ve posted a few other writes, slow droplets of a water valve that has yet too fully open. I’m just happy that I’m finally able to post on a somewhat regular basis.
Stop by sometime and take a look. 🙂
Stop by sometime and take a look. 🙂
25th Jan 2019 00:03am
Omgoodness. I am just now getting on here more regularly so I hate I've missed anything. Coming over now!!
25th Jan 2019 00:10am
Silly me. I've commented on your two latest and even added the most recent one to my RL. Duh moments!!!
25th Jan 2019 2:02pm
Haha! That’s ok. I knew you had but figured you were having a moment, I more than I can count so no worries.
