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Re. WINGS
3rd Jan 2019 5:47am
These really are your area. You taught me some new words. Mmm..I love those! Wonderful, it's lovely seeing you in the feeds lately!
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Re: Re. WINGS
3rd Jan 2019 4:04pm
Thank you Pandora! I do enjoy the impact of the form. I speak Spanish and having learned to do so increased my English vocabulary two-fold. A word like quotidian is much more commonly used in Spanish, "cotidiana. " I appreciate your encouraging words.
Re. WINGS
3rd Jan 2019 11:17pm
Like Pandora, you taught me some new words. Much appreciated! This is, as always, wonderful work. You have found such style in a short but powerful form.
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Re: Re. WINGS
4th Jan 2019 00:46am
Thank you Sir Crow! I was pondering life back in the post holiday fray. Can I rise above the tedious regimen of life or are the daily routines things that I will miss the most growing old.
Re. WINGS
8th Jan 2019 4:33am
and even a perfected cocoon shows imperfections which can be just as
beautiful
"but a cocoon shows crack"
yes i read it two to three ways, and i love it!
beautiful
"but a cocoon shows crack"
yes i read it two to three ways, and i love it!
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Re: Re. WINGS
8th Jan 2019 4:58am
Thank you Howling! I was settibg a goal with this one... To finally spread my wing, break away and rise above the mundane, the tedium. We'll see how it goes.
Re. WINGS
5th Feb 2019 4:06pm
Love the crisp pithiness of this ... line breaks are simply perfect ... bravo GW ...
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