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The One
You are the one
Who makes me complete
I am the one
Your soul truly seeks
You are the one
To make life worthwhile
I am the one
Whose memory brings smiles
You are the one
That filled me with pleasure
I am the one
Who brought toys and treasures
You are the one
That created magic between my thighs
I am the one
Who rode hard ‘til you sighed
You are the one
Who fueled my sexual fire
I am the one
That fed your carnal desires
Are we the ones
Still crazy at heart?
Yes. We are still one…
A bond that will never part…
Who makes me complete
I am the one
Your soul truly seeks
You are the one
To make life worthwhile
I am the one
Whose memory brings smiles
You are the one
That filled me with pleasure
I am the one
Who brought toys and treasures
You are the one
That created magic between my thighs
I am the one
Who rode hard ‘til you sighed
You are the one
Who fueled my sexual fire
I am the one
That fed your carnal desires
Are we the ones
Still crazy at heart?
Yes. We are still one…
A bond that will never part…
Published 2nd Jan 2019
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2nd Jan 2019 10:56pm
2nd Jan 2019 11:36pm
Love and lust are sometimes so intertwined that we cannot discern the two. I enjoyed the poem. Keep up the good work!
5th Jan 2019 4:42am
5th Jan 2019 2:42am
5th Jan 2019 4:41am
Thanks BD. Knowing that my words brings a fellow poet back for a second read is an AWESOME complement!!!
21st Jan 2019 3:22pm
This is altogether beautiful! It's the kind of poem I would like to write for my wife. If I did, all the lust and wayward passion (carnality) would become legitimate consummation within the bond of holy matrimony and no guilt would intervene. The monolithic dialogue creates a warm feeling of synchrony between two souls that have become one.
Might I suggest that what appears as though sex were the only ultimate pursuit should probably be only symbolic of the complete harmony of oneness that words cannot express...
Might I suggest that what appears as though sex were the only ultimate pursuit should probably be only symbolic of the complete harmony of oneness that words cannot express...
9th Jul 2019 11:28am
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