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Humming Bird
rain drumming on the window pane
toy humming on my pussy's mane
stroking, teasing, slowly pleasing
it's pleasure that I seek; this arousing
needs my focus, I'm enjoying the thrill
delaying this ascent up my climaxing hill
tension building, let this feeling grow
with gentle pressure, nice and slow
this new toy of mine proving a hit
that's it baby; softly massage my clit
flower blossoming, feeling warm and wet
nearly there, yes, oh yes, oh yes, you bet!
toy humming on my pussy's mane
stroking, teasing, slowly pleasing
it's pleasure that I seek; this arousing
needs my focus, I'm enjoying the thrill
delaying this ascent up my climaxing hill
tension building, let this feeling grow
with gentle pressure, nice and slow
this new toy of mine proving a hit
that's it baby; softly massage my clit
flower blossoming, feeling warm and wet
nearly there, yes, oh yes, oh yes, you bet!
Published 31st Dec 2018
| Edited 4th Jan 2019
Author's Note
Helen Jane's poem 'Toys' was my inspiration for this write. And then, as this is obviously not my area of expertise, I collaborated with some open minded women who allowed me into some very personal space. Thank you HJ and WP for the emails and photos no doubt lubricated (no pun intended) with wine!
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31st Dec 2018 3:47pm
Hmmm ... nice erotica here ... love hummingbirds ... the real ones ... and the really real ones ...
31st Dec 2018 3:50pm
Thank you Lil, I've missed you! Compliments of the season and Happy New Year. David x
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31st Dec 2018 4:03pm
Must've been difficult to get into the feminine mind set but you have done it well 😊. Well done.
31st Dec 2018 4:13pm
Thanks for commenting Rob. Fascinating insight into female sexuality and mindset. My respect and appreciation just went up another notch!
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