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21st Dec 2018 11:10pm
Your senryu amazes me once again. I wish I could say so much and be concise about it. Excellent job.
22nd Dec 2018 1:19am
Thank you Sir Crow! Not sure the title makes sense to anyone but me. I do enjoy the "POW!" aspect of writing Senryu/Haiku.
22nd Dec 2018 9:17pm
Hate is such a waste of living. These poems are your thing my dear friend!!
23rd Dec 2018 00:21am
Thank you Pandora! This form allows a concise way to express what I'm feeling in the moment. Although often the word placement takes more thought than in a larger piece. I am glad you like the piece.
