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12/20/18

you are lovely
and insane / so is the world
our feet cling to
SatInUGal
Written by SatInUGal (Kumar)
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Hunterapsych
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Re. 12/20/18
(Shaman among machines)
20th Dec 2018 11:45pm
So good bravo this I dig 👏👏👏
Hunterapsych
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Re: Re. 12/20/18
(Kumar)
21st Dec 2018 00:14am
Yeah! :D
SatInUGal
Re. 12/20/18
21st Dec 2018 3:24am
These are great lines
Bonzi
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Re: Re. 12/20/18
(Kumar)
21st Dec 2018 3:31am
For your
Inhalation
Pleasure
SatInUGal
Re: Re. 12/20/18
21st Dec 2018 3:55am
You do fine work at it.
Bonzi
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Re: Re. 12/20/18
(Kumar)
21st Dec 2018 3:57am
Thanks
SatInUGal
Re. 12/20/18
21st Dec 2018 3:34am
The simple truth. Odd creatures living in an odd world. I love this piece, Kumar.
Eerie
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Re: Re. 12/20/18
(Kumar)
21st Dec 2018 3:37am
That means a lot to me Eerie
SatInUGal

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