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"Cake by The Ocean"
Ocean island on a mid-summer day
Two lovers hidden away
No service, life off the grid
That bikini - honey get rid
We're the only people here
No one within shot of ear
Giveth thy your hand
Layeth your body down in sand
Gentle tropic waves open the gate
A seducing tease, an erotic plait
You start to quake - poisonous potion
Eating your cake by the ocean.
Two lovers hidden away
No service, life off the grid
That bikini - honey get rid
We're the only people here
No one within shot of ear
Giveth thy your hand
Layeth your body down in sand
Gentle tropic waves open the gate
A seducing tease, an erotic plait
You start to quake - poisonous potion
Eating your cake by the ocean.
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18th Dec 2018 00:20am
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A writhe in the tide. Favourite lines:
That bikini - honey get rid
We're the only people here
No one within shot of ear
That bikini - honey get rid
We're the only people here
No one within shot of ear
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18th Dec 2018 1:40pm
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2018 7:27pm
Loved it. Hope you ate all the cake.
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