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Close Calls

Close,

Doesn't count

When dealing with

� � � � � � � Horseshoes
� � � � � � � � Shuffleboad
� � � � � � � � Snooker
� � � � � � � � Hand Grenades
� � � � � � � � Ropeless Rock Climbing
� � � � � � � � or
� � � � � � � � Atomic Wars.

Close,

Counts only when one

Cares.

Tallen

Written by Tallen

(earth_empath)

Published 16th Dec 2018

#hope

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Re. Close Calls

LUUH19 (Emeraldia)

13th Jan 2019 2:33pm

The last line completes the poem and gives it meaning. Beautifully written.

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Tallen (earth_empath)

13th Jan 2019 2:43pm

thank You for stopping by to read
and sharing Your thoughts on this spill

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Re. Close Calls

CSD1558 (Minxy)

25th Mar 2019 11:33pm

Close...counts

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Tallen (earth_empath)

25th Mar 2019 11:45pm

it always counts
and counts extra
where intimacy if found

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