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The Badlands
A snake in the grass
A rattle
And a velvety black tongue
These things captivate me
But I know
To not get too close
I wish I knew that with you
A snake in the grass
A rattle
And a velvety black tongue
These things captivate me
But I know
To not get too close
I wish I knew that with you
Published 14th Dec 2018
Author's Note
I wrote this one in the early part of this year, but just rediscovered it while searching for something else.
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 5:56pm
Hey Kumar,
I love that, my friend!
That can be the truth at times.
Sorry, I've been away for a while(I had a blackness in my skull that took over my whole body, and skull, but I found out it was just indigestion. lol).
Enjoyed that, though.
MZ.
I love that, my friend!
That can be the truth at times.
Sorry, I've been away for a while(I had a blackness in my skull that took over my whole body, and skull, but I found out it was just indigestion. lol).
Enjoyed that, though.
MZ.
14th Dec 2018 6:02pm
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14th Dec 2018 9:39pm
14th Dec 2018 9:47pm
A beauty of poetry is that it can capture a moment and make it as eternal as the medium allows (someday bye bye internet, pages, etc). I was feeling angry with my partner, wrote this poem, and probably hours later was just fine. But this sentiment is neat, and I put it in a gilded cage for my little museum :)
