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Onion’d
She exhausts me
in an
unimaginable
way.
Working myself into
a frenzy,
I buzz about
and way lay
& flay. . .
Emotions fall to
the wayside,
layers peeled
one
at
a
time.
Tears of release
“ You needed release,”
She tenderly assures
me.
And now,
physically,
I am wiped out
still,
in our stillness,
my skin craves
Hers,
as well.
in an
unimaginable
way.
Working myself into
a frenzy,
I buzz about
and way lay
& flay. . .
Emotions fall to
the wayside,
layers peeled
one
at
a
time.
Tears of release
“ You needed release,”
She tenderly assures
me.
And now,
physically,
I am wiped out
still,
in our stillness,
my skin craves
Hers,
as well.
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Re. Onion’d
11th Dec 2018 6:43pm
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11th Dec 2018 7:12pm
Re: Re. Onion’d
11th Dec 2018 7:15pm
We all have a past and oft it's a comfort to release it on here
Happiest I guess writing of the future yet seen
Happiest I guess writing of the future yet seen
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Re. Onion’d
11th Dec 2018 6:44pm
Re: Re. Onion’d
11th Dec 2018 7:13pm
Layered emotion?
Hmmmmm........... I like this! :)
Thank You
and appreciate the RL add
Hmmmmm........... I like this! :)
Thank You
and appreciate the RL add
Re. Onion’d
Anonymous
11th Dec 2018 6:47pm
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Re: Re. Onion’d
11th Dec 2018 7:15pm
I try to spill my ink
with the format one would use to write
a paper for a college prof
Intro
Body
Conclusion
Appreciate Your kind comments
and thank You for causing me to smile
with the format one would use to write
a paper for a college prof
Intro
Body
Conclusion
Appreciate Your kind comments
and thank You for causing me to smile
Re. Onion’d
12th Dec 2018 9:21am
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12th Dec 2018 11:14am
Re. Onion’d
7th Mar 2021 6:11pm
Ohhh to peel back our layers, exposing our truths in all their glory and still having someone say those words of desire and love. It's the ultimate, imo. To be accepted and cherished, warts and all, right?
This piece speaks deeply to me, Tallen.
Ty for sharing it again
🌹
xo
This piece speaks deeply to me, Tallen.
Ty for sharing it again
🌹
xo
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Re: Re. Onion’d
8th Mar 2021 3:01pm
To be supported in such a quiet tender gentle way
is ultra intimate
As each layer uncovers another aspect of a person
and be accepted without expectation or interpretation ...
Yes, agree with You
Honored for the RL add
is ultra intimate
As each layer uncovers another aspect of a person
and be accepted without expectation or interpretation ...
Yes, agree with You
Honored for the RL add
Re. Onion’d
9th Mar 2021 10:32am
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9th Mar 2021 4:06pm