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She Breathes
She breathes
Her breath is life
With each lung full
A heart beats strongly
In the emotions of love
A soul laments
Where passion dwelled
Seeing through eyes of fire
The truth of love
Imagining her lover
The shaping of moments
Between connecting beings
Her heart feels more alive
Finding a smile that was lost
Welling up with happiness
The beautiful entity of love
Touching her senses
Electrical shivers
This is why she breathes
To share her heart and soul
Her breath is life
With each lung full
A heart beats strongly
In the emotions of love
A soul laments
Where passion dwelled
Seeing through eyes of fire
The truth of love
Imagining her lover
The shaping of moments
Between connecting beings
Her heart feels more alive
Finding a smile that was lost
Welling up with happiness
The beautiful entity of love
Touching her senses
Electrical shivers
This is why she breathes
To share her heart and soul
Written by
AspergerPoet56
Published 10th Dec 2018
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12th Dec 2018 7:05am
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12th Dec 2018 7:28am
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12th Dec 2018 7:32am
Think because of my autism I look at things differently I’m self taught kinda stumbled upon writing now it’s one of my obsessions along with music
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12th Dec 2018 7:43am
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12th Dec 2018 7:48am
I was diagnosed when I was 44 seems I had very good coping mechanisms well till I tried something stupid and in the ensuing counselling sessions it was suggested I might be autistic
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12th Dec 2018 7:59am
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12th Dec 2018 8:01am
I always felt different and distant from people even in the army was thought a little bit out there
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12th Dec 2018 8:09am
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12th Dec 2018 8:12am
I saw everything in black and white wasn’t scared to say the truth my honesty was called brutal
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12th Dec 2018 8:29am
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12th Dec 2018 8:45am
People ask for the truth but when given it usually upsets them it’s gotten me into trouble at work so many times
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12th Dec 2018 9:41am
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12th Dec 2018 9:51am
I’ve never judged other people’s work don’t think I’m qualified to do so
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12th Dec 2018 1:08pm
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12th Dec 2018 1:18pm
I seem to feel it, like without being egotistical I know when I like what I write but as for pointing out flaws the only reason I do it at work is because I know my job I know what’s expected and if I think they don’t match up anywhere I let people know, I’m not that confident in poetry cause I didn’t do poetry at school I could name famous poets but haven’t read any of their poems I like your poem cause it reminded me of how write and how I feel whe,n I read what I write if that makes any sense at all
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12th Dec 2018 1:36pm
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3rd Feb 2019 00:12am
You write beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing it with the world. You are awesome!
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