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why I write
the poetry is second rate,
but then it keeps me amused
during the long, cold hours of the night;
it's either that, or the booze ..
Published 8th Dec 2018
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8th Dec 2018 11:25pm
I agree, it's good to choose
poetic work and not the booze
the latter one's a subtle ruse
that leaves one dangling, oft confused.
poetic work and not the booze
the latter one's a subtle ruse
that leaves one dangling, oft confused.
I'm sorry Josh,
but nobody says oft :)
perhaps that's the difference
between poetry and prose,
prose just flows ..
but nobody says oft :)
perhaps that's the difference
between poetry and prose,
prose just flows ..
9th Dec 2018 6:19pm
I know, I know ... 'oft' scanned better, hence the downfall in relation to prose. :))
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Anonymous
9th Dec 2018 1:38am
I think you should change the ending to
"it's either that, or being boozed .."
Because I like rhymes.
"it's either that, or being boozed .."
Because I like rhymes.
