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Back zen
Life became
so
simple back then
The day after
several
several days before
simplified
Life felt
so
so complicated
after (Your)
the memorial service
I lost direction
lost my determination
lost my zeal ...
my will
In losing
Complication
shared a bed
with Simplicity
And I in this
hell-raising
hell-bent existence
I heard you
You tugged me
and I later found
zen...
I am on the journey
and will see You soon
enough………
so
simple back then
The day after
several
several days before
simplified
Life felt
so
so complicated
after (Your)
the memorial service
I lost direction
lost my determination
lost my zeal ...
my will
In losing
Complication
shared a bed
with Simplicity
And I in this
hell-raising
hell-bent existence
I heard you
You tugged me
and I later found
zen...
I am on the journey
and will see You soon
enough………
Published 4th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2018 9:50pm
Tallen,
That's tough, because of the emotions involved, but that's another fantastically written poem!
Hope you're doing well, my friend! I know December breezes can blow cold.
Take care,
MZ.
That's tough, because of the emotions involved, but that's another fantastically written poem!
Hope you're doing well, my friend! I know December breezes can blow cold.
Take care,
MZ.
5th Dec 2018 5:15am
I have my poor days but finding this place and mtg kind people like Yourself
has helped in more ways than I can fully express
thank You, Brother
has helped in more ways than I can fully express
thank You, Brother
Anonymous
5th Dec 2018 5:28am
I know what you mean, my friend. Sometimes this place really helps because there are some nice people, like you.
Take care.
MZ.
Take care.
MZ.
