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I知 Gonna Rain!💦
( a Quatern )
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!,
We spend all day in bed like kids at play.
The way you fuck me till I scream your name,
We waited years, now it痴 the only way.
Like Romeo and Juliet on ice,
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
But after years, the scenery was nice,
With naught to lose and everything to gain.
Love verses made of flowers, our refrain,
But then I dreamed I felt there must be more.
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
With you I want to be your little whore.
The day when I came out and locked the door,
Then you came out, you didn稚 even strain.
We starved for sex what were we waiting for?
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!,
We spend all day in bed like kids at play.
The way you fuck me till I scream your name,
We waited years, now it痴 the only way.
Like Romeo and Juliet on ice,
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
But after years, the scenery was nice,
With naught to lose and everything to gain.
Love verses made of flowers, our refrain,
But then I dreamed I felt there must be more.
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
With you I want to be your little whore.
The day when I came out and locked the door,
Then you came out, you didn稚 even strain.
We starved for sex what were we waiting for?
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
Published 4th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2018 3:52pm
Hey Jadey!
If it was raining you, I wouldn't even pull out the umbrella!!
Very nice, my friend! You're the best.
Your Quatern Intern,
Matthew.
If it was raining you, I wouldn't even pull out the umbrella!!
Very nice, my friend! You're the best.
Your Quatern Intern,
Matthew.
*smiles*
Aw puppy, are you my Quatern Intern? That痴 sweet.😊
Thanks for liking my ink.
Jadey💦
Aw puppy, are you my Quatern Intern? That痴 sweet.😊
Thanks for liking my ink.
Jadey💦
Anonymous
5th Dec 2018 1:41am
You're welcome, Beautiful.
I miss you.
Matthew.
I miss you.
Matthew.
4th Dec 2018 5:08pm
5th Dec 2018 1:18am
Oh such words for me of your embrace of my express. So very special. And gracious thanks, dear Rjm, for the RL honor.
Jade💦
Jade💦
4th Dec 2018 5:21pm
when ridden hard two fine bliss
and heavily joy as we cry out with joy
good write
and heavily joy as we cry out with joy
good write
5th Dec 2018 1:20am
Tnank you, dear poet, for your read & lovely words of support. Your visits are a joy.
Jade💦
Jade💦
4th Dec 2018 10:40pm
A fine, erotic weather report. Your rain washes the blues away. Love the wording and how it rhymes:
Love verses made of flowers, our refrain,
But then I dreamed I felt there must be more.
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
With you I want to be your little whore.
Your forecast calls for superb work, this and others yet to come...
Love verses made of flowers, our refrain,
But then I dreamed I felt there must be more.
Your love, when ridden hard; I知 gonna rain!
With you I want to be your little whore.
Your forecast calls for superb work, this and others yet to come...
5th Dec 2018 1:08am
Omgosh my dearest friend, thanks so much for the wonderful reception to my piece. I love the parallel with the weather forecast.😊
I知 delighted over your enjoyment.
Jadey x
Love to dear Ninja.
I知 delighted over your enjoyment.
Jadey x
Love to dear Ninja.
5th Dec 2018 2:59am
This was beautifully written and your refrains only refined your work. You have a new found fan.. and another Pandora.;)
5th Dec 2018 3:15am
Oh thank you, and YES, I致e always adored your site name!
And am thrilled & honored for the accolade & RL honor, and the Follow... oh such a day this has been!
I値l be reading you too as I now follow you as well!
love x
Ever
jadey💦
And am thrilled & honored for the accolade & RL honor, and the Follow... oh such a day this has been!
I値l be reading you too as I now follow you as well!
love x
Ever
jadey💦
Anonymous
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