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Deer Run
clear day
sun was setting
on the mountain
bare trees dappled
glowing shades of pink
restless branches swayed
light playing
between shadows
deer ran
their spirits barely
touching earth
clouds of white tail
marked their ghostly appearance
and they were gone
sun was setting
on the mountain
bare trees dappled
glowing shades of pink
restless branches swayed
light playing
between shadows
deer ran
their spirits barely
touching earth
clouds of white tail
marked their ghostly appearance
and they were gone
Published 3rd Dec 2018
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3rd Dec 2018 7:38pm
"sun - mountain - pink - branches - ran - appearance - gone" ... those 'n' words-sounds really carried it well. Really nicely done. :))
3rd Dec 2018 8:58pm
Thank you so much Josh for the thoughtful comments and feedback ... sometimes finding the right words to perfectly explain such an amazing sight is tricky
4th Dec 2018 2:14am
4th Dec 2018 2:46am
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4th Dec 2018 10:20am
I like the appreciation of a beautiful moment in nature, even more special because it is only a fleeting moment then gone. Appreciation of the moment.
4th Dec 2018 5:23pm
Thank you so much wordpainter for the beautiful comments... appreciating the moment is truly what it's about
