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A Woman’s Strength
power within a woman
calms a mans soul
with her luving kiss
her tears are not weakness
as some have found out
but strength misjudged
in storms of angry rage
a sultry voice pierces your heart
all the while hers is breaking
there’s sadness in her soul
she hides deep within
look into those green eyes
you’ll see passions emptiness
that’s when truth will be known
you’ve forsaken her all that she is
moods change like the oceans tide
pain beneath her skin lashes out
emotions confused from your betrayal
end of day, rest your head upon her breasts
she holds you close with sweet passion
that’s when you feel her inside beauty
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
calms a mans soul
with her luving kiss
her tears are not weakness
as some have found out
but strength misjudged
in storms of angry rage
a sultry voice pierces your heart
all the while hers is breaking
there’s sadness in her soul
she hides deep within
look into those green eyes
you’ll see passions emptiness
that’s when truth will be known
you’ve forsaken her all that she is
moods change like the oceans tide
pain beneath her skin lashes out
emotions confused from your betrayal
end of day, rest your head upon her breasts
she holds you close with sweet passion
that’s when you feel her inside beauty
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. A Woman’s Strength
25th Nov 2018 2:51am
Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
25th Nov 2018 2:56am
Hey Howling.......didn’t know it till I wrote it......I needed it too.......thank you......hope it makes you see your own strength within you.......honored for the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
25th Nov 2018 2:58am
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25th Nov 2018 3:27am
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
27th Nov 2018 5:43pm
Hey Bender.......such true words......a man that luvs her knows how to treat her.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. A Woman’s Strength
25th Nov 2018 5:59am
her tears are not weakness
as some have found out
but strength misjudged
Amen to that sister! 😊
as some have found out
but strength misjudged
Amen to that sister! 😊
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
27th Nov 2018 5:46pm
Hey Rose.......thank you so much for the “Amen Sister”....... made me smile.......luv & hugs xo :)
Re. A Woman’s Strength
Anonymous
25th Nov 2018 6:36am
What a wonderful poem, Purple!
You ARE a beautiful, strong woman(and amazingly kind), perfect.
Stay awesome my friend, and keep writing your beautiful words!
Matthew.
You ARE a beautiful, strong woman(and amazingly kind), perfect.
Stay awesome my friend, and keep writing your beautiful words!
Matthew.

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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
27th Nov 2018 5:56pm
Awe Matt.......thank you for always leaving great encouraging words.......you’re awesome.......honored by the RL.......stay being you my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
27th Nov 2018 6:07pm
Hey Shannon.......interesting response......happy to know that Christ is in your life.......spiritually and physically He no longer hangs on the cross.......He lives in heaven and lives within our hearts......thank you for visiting my ink......thrilled you like it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
27th Nov 2018 6:11pm
Awe thank you sweet Lily.......you have been for many souls (including me) an inspiration of strength.......appreciate your words of encouragement and support.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. A Woman’s Strength
25th Nov 2018 1:50pm
I think you've got the making of a wonderful song-lyric there, flowergirl. Beautiful.
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
27th Nov 2018 6:20pm
Hey Josh......I know a few song writers I will run it by them........thank you for your support and sharing thoughts with me.......honored for the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. A Woman’s Strength
25th Nov 2018 2:26pm
There is no beauty aside that of forgiveness. Beautifully done, FloweredOne.
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
28th Nov 2018 3:01am
Hey Ahavati.......you’re always so graceful with your comments......your insight between lines amazes me.......thank you my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. A Woman’s Strength
25th Nov 2018 11:15pm
Love this, Flower. One of your best. My favorite lines:
her tears are not weakness
as some have found out
but strength misjudged
The ability to openly shed tears really is a gift. Stoicism is overrated. Crying is a catharsis, and an invaluable one. Excellent work, Flower!
her tears are not weakness
as some have found out
but strength misjudged
The ability to openly shed tears really is a gift. Stoicism is overrated. Crying is a catharsis, and an invaluable one. Excellent work, Flower!
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
28th Nov 2018 3:16am
Hey Crow.......those lines are personal for me......tears have been mistaken for weakness and not anger.......a sign of holding back words of hurt......respecting the others soul by not saying words you can’t take back.......thank for a thought provoking response......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. A Woman’s Strength
30th Nov 2018 5:39am
Very moving ! I felt guilty for a bit reading it.
“But I know, that she knows, I loved, and love her so !
The wretched wind of sever blew ! tearing, and cutting, our Rose of love, in two”
This just came out after reading your wonderful poem !
“But I know, that she knows, I loved, and love her so !
The wretched wind of sever blew ! tearing, and cutting, our Rose of love, in two”
This just came out after reading your wonderful poem !
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
2nd Dec 2018 1:59am
Hey Robert.......I’m very honored for your response.......blessed to have inspired such beautiful words........thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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18th Dec 2018 5:07pm
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3rd Dec 2018 11:22am
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Re: Re. A Woman’s Strength
21st Dec 2018 3:25am
Hey Orenda.......thank you for your graceful words.......always look forward to your smile upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)