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NAIMA EFFECT
Looking in the mirror
Seeing myself holding you
We are beautiful
Seeing myself holding you
We are beautiful
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published 22nd Nov 2018
Author's Note
for the "to love myself" comp
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. NAIMA EFFECT
22nd Nov 2018 4:54am
Oh Kumar, I feel like it's been a long time since you have laid down a haiku. So beautiful.
P.s. Good luck in the comp :)
P.s. Good luck in the comp :)
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Re: Re. NAIMA EFFECT
22nd Nov 2018 4:57am
Thanks. I have so many haiku, Eerie. It was my preferred form for many years (although now I realize many are actually senryu). I clearly need to post some more.
Re: Re. NAIMA EFFECT
22nd Nov 2018 5:00am
When I was new here I followed you because you wrote so much haiku. Lol hasn't been that long ago but feels like it.
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Re: Re. NAIMA EFFECT
22nd Nov 2018 5:04am
If you don't mind wading through the filler, you can find a lot of my haiku and senryu at my poetry blog (check my profile). It's not super updated for recent stuff, but has a cornucopia of older stuff that almost no one here has seen. Oh and I sent you a message :)
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22nd Nov 2018 5:07am
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22nd Nov 2018 5:08am
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22nd Nov 2018 5:11am
Re. NAIMA EFFECT
22nd Nov 2018 1:41pm
Very nice haiku. The interpretations can be different, but I see it as the separate parts of the narrator coming together and accepting each other.
Thanks for participating in my competitin!
Thanks for participating in my competitin!
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22nd Nov 2018 4:26pm
Re. NAIMA EFFECT
1st Dec 2018 3:28pm