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laid to rest
~
i wonder if my time has come
have i lingered in this life too long
where did it go wrong
where did it not
i could never quite tell if i was getting ahead
or if i was clawing my way out
it was always too close to call
i could chase a butterfly and run into a bee
always blind sided by things i couldn't see
now i want to put everything away
lay down the apples and the violets and all the rest
lay them to rest
i need to rest
everything that ever was a part of me
must be laid to rest forever within me
forever with me
i have lingered here in this life too long
i do believe my time has come
to move on
~
i wonder if my time has come
have i lingered in this life too long
where did it go wrong
where did it not
i could never quite tell if i was getting ahead
or if i was clawing my way out
it was always too close to call
i could chase a butterfly and run into a bee
always blind sided by things i couldn't see
now i want to put everything away
lay down the apples and the violets and all the rest
lay them to rest
i need to rest
everything that ever was a part of me
must be laid to rest forever within me
forever with me
i have lingered here in this life too long
i do believe my time has come
to move on
~
Published 19th Nov 2018
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19th Nov 2018 7:33am
21st Nov 2018 2:56am
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 4:43pm
Ani!!!!
I wanted to write that poem!!
I'm sorry, but you're fantastic! So please don't be down.
I just love your writing!
Matthew.
I wanted to write that poem!!
I'm sorry, but you're fantastic! So please don't be down.
I just love your writing!
Matthew.
21st Nov 2018 2:57am
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
21st Nov 2018 4:30am
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21st Nov 2018 4:40am
22nd Nov 2018 3:35am
Moving on the right way of course... I too like the way this poem ends but I also like the way it starts, moving full circle.
22nd Nov 2018 4:02am
