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SYMBIOTIC, NO.
Scratching at an open wound to get at my marrow
While dark red from damaged veins pours out slow.
Reaching for femurs fully cracked and narrow
You drain my life, my zeal, my glow.
A love offering of gauze and tape
And sex to suture, mend and heal.
But fractured promises felt like rape
Leaking bright crimson's sticky feel.
Adipose tissued compromises failed
Torn ligamented hopes of two strained.
Rotting flesh of forgiveness jailed
As decomposing divorce is on its way.
Marrow gone and drained of red
No more joy or playful glow.
Narrow escape and barely not dead
Aorta Yes, Symbiotic, No.
While dark red from damaged veins pours out slow.
Reaching for femurs fully cracked and narrow
You drain my life, my zeal, my glow.
A love offering of gauze and tape
And sex to suture, mend and heal.
But fractured promises felt like rape
Leaking bright crimson's sticky feel.
Adipose tissued compromises failed
Torn ligamented hopes of two strained.
Rotting flesh of forgiveness jailed
As decomposing divorce is on its way.
Marrow gone and drained of red
No more joy or playful glow.
Narrow escape and barely not dead
Aorta Yes, Symbiotic, No.
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 16th Nov 2018
Author's Note
SatInUGal (Kumar)'s recent ink: MY FIRST MARRAIGE
-- dug up a memory for me.
-- dug up a memory for me.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
16th Nov 2018 6:56pm
We can go bury deep
But often not deep enough
Maybe not so bad to remember
Bad moments to appreciate the good
But often not deep enough
Maybe not so bad to remember
Bad moments to appreciate the good
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Re: Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
16th Nov 2018 7:12pm
100% agree on the not deep enough!
The poor memories
give strength to the good ones made moving forward
The poor memories
give strength to the good ones made moving forward
Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
whew, my freaking god hun..
your proposition is overwhelmingly pleasant though
sadness besets me.. yes, it brings our own dissolutions to light and it took my breaths..
thank you for sharing
your proposition is overwhelmingly pleasant though
sadness besets me.. yes, it brings our own dissolutions to light and it took my breaths..
thank you for sharing
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Re: Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
17th Nov 2018 2:11pm
I was more angry back then than sad.
If there was any sad it was the fact that me and the ex couldn't make it work after nearly 4 years.
appreciate the read and your share
If there was any sad it was the fact that me and the ex couldn't make it work after nearly 4 years.
appreciate the read and your share
Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
17th Nov 2018 3:02pm
damn!!! a succubus on steroids you had there...
the is one heavy vibe
powerfully written
much respect!!
the is one heavy vibe
powerfully written
much respect!!
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Re: Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
17th Nov 2018 5:41pm
nah, not a succubus
my ex wife is an athlete and so MAYBE on steroids - lol
thank you for the share
my ex wife is an athlete and so MAYBE on steroids - lol
thank you for the share
Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
17th Nov 2018 4:50pm
Re: Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
17th Nov 2018 5:42pm
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8th Mar 2019 10:55pm
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Re: Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
8th Mar 2019 11:00pm
I spilled this about a month before my divorce got finalized.
Yeah, I was angry and hurt
but I didn't want to carry this shit around and so,
the spill.
appreciate the read
thank You
Yeah, I was angry and hurt
but I didn't want to carry this shit around and so,
the spill.
appreciate the read
thank You
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
8th Mar 2019 11:04pm
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Re: Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
8th Mar 2019 11:07pm
this was a long time ago
While we don't stay in contact,
there's no more animosity.
She remarried and is raising a family.
I am friends with nearly all my exes
and unfortunately (maybe) for me,
there are many.
appreciate the supportive comments
While we don't stay in contact,
there's no more animosity.
She remarried and is raising a family.
I am friends with nearly all my exes
and unfortunately (maybe) for me,
there are many.
appreciate the supportive comments
Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
26th Aug 2019 5:55am
Dear T,
“You drain my life, my zeal, my glow. ” argh! Right? It’s exhausting!
I am sorry for the suffering you experienced here. Betrayal is a vortex so dark and oxygen deprived. This is an excellent write aside from its sad subject matter. Very helpful on a personal level. Thank you. H🌷
“You drain my life, my zeal, my glow. ” argh! Right? It’s exhausting!
I am sorry for the suffering you experienced here. Betrayal is a vortex so dark and oxygen deprived. This is an excellent write aside from its sad subject matter. Very helpful on a personal level. Thank you. H🌷
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Re: Re. SYMBIOTIC, NO.
26th Aug 2019 6:00am
appreciate Your reading and sharing with me
fortunately this happened a long time ago
and i am over it.
But spilling this helped me release the strong
negative emotions.
thank You for the kind praise, as well
fortunately this happened a long time ago
and i am over it.
But spilling this helped me release the strong
negative emotions.
thank You for the kind praise, as well