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Corroded Perceptions
Corroded perceptions occupying
dull imaginations meandering
around imprisoned revenant
Others perhaps see failure,
expectations turning to rage
Satan stalks the depressed,
either she will be remembered
or overtly forsaken watch and see
while she quietly pushes aside
the veil of passing years.
dull imaginations meandering
around imprisoned revenant
Others perhaps see failure,
expectations turning to rage
Satan stalks the depressed,
either she will be remembered
or overtly forsaken watch and see
while she quietly pushes aside
the veil of passing years.
Published 13th Nov 2018
Author's Note
I wanted to touch on the reality of mental abuse,
and how distorted one's perception can get,
and this was my take.
and how distorted one's perception can get,
and this was my take.
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13th Nov 2018 12:57pm
and I think youve clearly noted your perspective
...a view that is felt as well as heard and comprehended
...a view that is felt as well as heard and comprehended
13th Nov 2018 5:21pm
13th Nov 2018 6:54pm
13th Nov 2018 7:18pm
Thank you, yes it is a sensitive subject for some, and a release for me.
13th Nov 2018 7:30pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
15th Nov 2018 6:04pm
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15th Nov 2018 6:10pm
Anonymous
15th Nov 2018 7:02pm
I suffered from PTSD - it never really leaves, just case of learning coping mechanisms. You succinctly capture the condition.
15th Nov 2018 7:06pm
I suffer from it also, it can be managed but I find writing for me is the best medicine.
Thanks for your comment.
Thanks for your comment.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
12th May 2019 5:47pm
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