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Re: Re. 11/12/18
12th Nov 2018 8:27pm
Re. 11/12/18
12th Nov 2018 8:42pm
That's courage... Most would rather not.
Nice poignant piece. It hits like an arrow.
Nice poignant piece. It hits like an arrow.
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Re: Re. 11/12/18
12th Nov 2018 8:49pm
Thank you for finding the depth in it, and for the compliment. I am perhaps embarking on a new relationship, and this is my little symbol.
Re. 11/12/18
12th Nov 2018 9:34pm
Yeah, if you can be ok with the shadow first, then from there it can only get better.
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Re: Re. 11/12/18
12th Nov 2018 9:37pm
A person's shadow can be attractive, from a certain perspective. The source of immense pain at one point can also be the source of great beauty and happiness at another if the process is allowed to mature. Not sure how well I put that into words. Hmm, more future poems needed ;-)
Re. 11/12/18
13th Nov 2018 5:07pm
and shadows are simply nude
wow what a sexy motorphorific
expulsion
natural orgasmic
love sexation
wow what a sexy motorphorific
expulsion
natural orgasmic
love sexation
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