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Streets ahead _________________________________
Just over that hill
when we get there
think of the thrill
all lighted up
and we’re coasting
avenues all below!
We began, You and me
Parallel tempo’d beats
and in turning the corners
Learning, Healing feats.
” Streets ahead (of me), “
Is what You said.
Sorry to disagree
more awake, maybe
eyes wider opened
Spirited Free?!
Beautiful Good Friend
Please, no long face
we’re not in a race
(Just) don’t jog in place
Eventually,
and electrically
we all will arrive
for we are all
the same.
Please smile during
the ride.
& OK if hands not inside. . .
Love You.
when we get there
think of the thrill
all lighted up
and we’re coasting
avenues all below!
We began, You and me
Parallel tempo’d beats
and in turning the corners
Learning, Healing feats.
” Streets ahead (of me), “
Is what You said.
Sorry to disagree
more awake, maybe
eyes wider opened
Spirited Free?!
Beautiful Good Friend
Please, no long face
we’re not in a race
(Just) don’t jog in place
Eventually,
and electrically
we all will arrive
for we are all
the same.
Please smile during
the ride.
& OK if hands not inside. . .
Love You.
Published 8th Nov 2018
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8th Nov 2018 2:39pm
Inspirational & motivational piece indeed
Be the walk an enjoyable experience
Enjoying the views one might miss out on if running on ahead
In my opinion, (and not always acted upon by me I might add) a slow walk towards a loving relationship beats running headlong with tunnel vision
Unfortunately many do
Be the walk an enjoyable experience
Enjoying the views one might miss out on if running on ahead
In my opinion, (and not always acted upon by me I might add) a slow walk towards a loving relationship beats running headlong with tunnel vision
Unfortunately many do
8th Nov 2018 3:09pm
There is truth in that saying,
" Stop and smell the roses. "
I prefer to do everything slow.
Sometimes it makes my friends restless -- lol
" Stop and smell the roses. "
I prefer to do everything slow.
Sometimes it makes my friends restless -- lol
8th Nov 2018 3:46pm
Restless maybe but your thinking is the right way for you
There's nothing wrong with going slow as long as they are aware and reassured
There's nothing wrong with going slow as long as they are aware and reassured
8th Nov 2018 3:21pm
8th Nov 2018 6:17pm
