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Just Another Dream
My eyes roll back and I feel
with every touch
with every brush
presented
I feel fragments of you
clinging to the fringes
of my aching soul
Caress my best and I, in turn
will kiss off the worries
into the breeze
let the lilac lick's drape
the nape of neverland
and lean right into me
time slows to a crawl and
our moments take off
'neath a scarlet gaze
warm and sweet like the sun
tomorrow comes alive with the night
holding on to me forever more
Timid my tongue slides to the sides
of your radiance and with my heartbeat
dances solo
basking
in the essence of your innocence
and I know I am home
your naked chest touches my heart
our pleasures pulse
rapid breaths rest
whispered tones take hold
your pursed lips melt my eyes
and with a longing, loving kiss
we, together, are one
with every touch
with every brush
presented
I feel fragments of you
clinging to the fringes
of my aching soul
Caress my best and I, in turn
will kiss off the worries
into the breeze
let the lilac lick's drape
the nape of neverland
and lean right into me
time slows to a crawl and
our moments take off
'neath a scarlet gaze
warm and sweet like the sun
tomorrow comes alive with the night
holding on to me forever more
Timid my tongue slides to the sides
of your radiance and with my heartbeat
dances solo
basking
in the essence of your innocence
and I know I am home
your naked chest touches my heart
our pleasures pulse
rapid breaths rest
whispered tones take hold
your pursed lips melt my eyes
and with a longing, loving kiss
we, together, are one
Published 8th Nov 2018
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8th Nov 2018 11:21am
"kiss off the worries" ... I love that line ... "let the lilac licks drape/the nape of neverland" ... great line break and rhyme ... "slides to the sides" ... awesome ...
8th Nov 2018 12:37pm
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8th Nov 2018 11:34am
Dreamland can be an intoxicating place. Hopefully without a hangover in the morning. Lovely write
8th Nov 2018 12:38pm
Haha no hangover. When the right one is in your dreams it is bliss. Thanks Willow
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8th Nov 2018 8:32pm
8th Nov 2018 8:44pm
Just another excellent poem. Favorite lines:
time slows to a crawl and
our moments take off
'neath a scarlet gaze
warm and sweet like the sun
But I love the whole write. Magnificent work!
time slows to a crawl and
our moments take off
'neath a scarlet gaze
warm and sweet like the sun
But I love the whole write. Magnificent work!
8th Nov 2018 8:54pm
Thank you Crowfly and honored to be added to your RL...she had me drifting in and out of dreamland this morning.
8th Nov 2018 10:35pm
Really great piece! I really enjoyed this.
Lovely writing filled with spectacular lines.
"Tomorrow comes alive with the night
holding on to me forever more" that's great👏 well done!
Lovely writing filled with spectacular lines.
"Tomorrow comes alive with the night
holding on to me forever more" that's great👏 well done!
8th Nov 2018 10:38pm
