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In The Mourning
Be careful
before you leave
dark is the stairwell
no one will see .
Movement outside
crush gravel sound
trying for quiet
standing out proud .
Feeble shadows
cast thin , lunar night
they touch the window
then crawl out of sight .
The sound of a handle
being turned
your life a candle
it flickers and burns .
I hope you make
the red dawning
before it's too late
for you in the mourning .
before you leave
dark is the stairwell
no one will see .
Movement outside
crush gravel sound
trying for quiet
standing out proud .
Feeble shadows
cast thin , lunar night
they touch the window
then crawl out of sight .
The sound of a handle
being turned
your life a candle
it flickers and burns .
I hope you make
the red dawning
before it's too late
for you in the mourning .
Published 5th Nov 2011
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5th Nov 2011 10:14pm
I like the part that says
''Your life a candle
it flickers and burns''
Its a really good comparison.
Keep writing!
''Your life a candle
it flickers and burns''
Its a really good comparison.
Keep writing!
5th Nov 2011 10:29pm
6th Nov 2011 1:10pm
