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WAR's Ledge
Crumbling under this pressure
Which has no measure
Losing everything I deeply treasure
Within WAR's multiple sinful fleeting pleasures
Trying to keep my demons at bay
Praying to my God each day
Feeling hopeless and dismayed
Willing it to go away
The answer is known
Every second of each day I am shown
Which is to end it all and let go
Yet I consciously don't
Breaking my pledge
Steeping forward leg by leg
Teetering on this edge
To continue dancing dangerously, with Death, upon WAR's ledge
Which has no measure
Losing everything I deeply treasure
Within WAR's multiple sinful fleeting pleasures
Trying to keep my demons at bay
Praying to my God each day
Feeling hopeless and dismayed
Willing it to go away
The answer is known
Every second of each day I am shown
Which is to end it all and let go
Yet I consciously don't
Breaking my pledge
Steeping forward leg by leg
Teetering on this edge
To continue dancing dangerously, with Death, upon WAR's ledge
Published 4th Nov 2011
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17th Nov 2011 10:44pm
Your poems truly bring out deeper meaning and thoughts no one would think from your pictures.
I loved the last line definetly reading list material
I loved the last line definetly reading list material
18th Nov 2011 2:35pm
I'm a very sarcastic person lol so it just plays into playful wit @picture.
This poem is symbolic of 3 different things the battle of the temptations of r'ships, sin and spiritual death.
(blushes) @ 'epic', I can only say i write exactly how i feel without inhibitions. Thanks for your very lovely compliment and comment.
This poem is symbolic of 3 different things the battle of the temptations of r'ships, sin and spiritual death.
(blushes) @ 'epic', I can only say i write exactly how i feel without inhibitions. Thanks for your very lovely compliment and comment.
