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my Succubus
She came to me
all moon dusted
traveling via
Selene's
silvery moon rays
penetrating my
restless, often lucid
dreams. She came
with sensual bait
and I hungered to drink
her dry.
I have yet to see her face
though liken to a
blind man, I KNOW I've
seen all of her and she
IS exquisite.
She neither questions
nor gives answers
only pleases and
entreats me to join
to meld with her.
I want to but........
We slept together
last night.
I woke up more
refreshed than ever
in a long, long time.
I'm still waiting
for the hook
though I suspect
she's already set
it.
all moon dusted
traveling via
Selene's
silvery moon rays
penetrating my
restless, often lucid
dreams. She came
with sensual bait
and I hungered to drink
her dry.
I have yet to see her face
though liken to a
blind man, I KNOW I've
seen all of her and she
IS exquisite.
She neither questions
nor gives answers
only pleases and
entreats me to join
to meld with her.
I want to but........
We slept together
last night.
I woke up more
refreshed than ever
in a long, long time.
I'm still waiting
for the hook
though I suspect
she's already set
it.
Published 21st Oct 2018
Author's Note
I chose the Dark category even though I've never looked at spirits and angels and demons as good or evil -- only high or low frequencies. Still, I have many friends who see demons as " bad " or evil, hence, the Dark Category.
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Anonymous
21st Oct 2018 8:01am
My first reading of this poem was in a voice not much louder than a whisper, the inflexion of certain words and phrases came naturally as if my voice had a mind of its own. The second reading saw a moistening of the eyes. Your words evoke something...beautiful, yet tinged with a darkness in its layers.
21st Oct 2018 8:05am
Thank you for sharing your Feel and for your thoughts.
You honor me with adding to Your Reading List.
You honor me with adding to Your Reading List.
22nd Oct 2018 5:18am
This evokes a dreamy feeling...laced with something dark and unyielding.
Very much enjoyed this piece.
Very much enjoyed this piece.
22nd Oct 2018 9:01am
Succubi can be unyielding.
Appreciate the read and your sharing your feel for this ink.
Appreciate the read and your sharing your feel for this ink.
9th Nov 2018 00:46am
I like Succubui inks, as well.
Thank you for kind praise and reading list addition.
I am honored
Thank you for kind praise and reading list addition.
I am honored
16th Feb 2019 6:48am
intent is intent..
we all vibe along the spectrum of 'good and evil'
it's all about what's acceptable to your senses
and codes of conduct
a succubus can be a 'good' thing if one likes to be devoured
you always give good morsels for thought Tallen
much respect
we all vibe along the spectrum of 'good and evil'
it's all about what's acceptable to your senses
and codes of conduct
a succubus can be a 'good' thing if one likes to be devoured
you always give good morsels for thought Tallen
much respect
16th Feb 2019 6:53am
always appreciate Your incite
thank You
My temptation to join the Demon angel is more selfish than my want of physical satisfaction and it's probably why I am still in this breathing form.
I have many kindred pagans who are caught up with good vs evil but I agree with You about the intent is intent.
thank You
My temptation to join the Demon angel is more selfish than my want of physical satisfaction and it's probably why I am still in this breathing form.
I have many kindred pagans who are caught up with good vs evil but I agree with You about the intent is intent.
4th Jan 2020 6:58pm
I feel my whole life has been a tightrope between good and evil.
Very thought provoking.
Very thought provoking.
4th Jan 2020 7:03pm
i used to feel as You are now
but since the day i renounced my Christian upbringing for a kinder belief system
i am at a wider, stronger rope & there is only negative and positive energies and or frequencies.
Delighted to poke Your heart & mind !!
Honored for the RL add
but since the day i renounced my Christian upbringing for a kinder belief system
i am at a wider, stronger rope & there is only negative and positive energies and or frequencies.
Delighted to poke Your heart & mind !!
Honored for the RL add
4th Jan 2020 7:09pm
I rejected Christianity as a child and not even a visit to Jerusalem could change my belief system. Though I am inquisitive and like to keep an open mind.
Thanks.
Thanks.
4th Jan 2020 7:20pm
After 9 / 11,
i believe that's when i Officially AWAKENED
I became a student of zen Buddhism.
You could take it up and still be a Christian or Muslim or Buddhist ........etc., and i thought How Fucking Wonderful is that!!?
zen provides me with a framework without limiting me and i get to fill in the blanks with anything!!
I kind of sensed You and me are similar in feel and thinking.........now it's beginning to make sense
Keep on with that Beautiful OPEN mind (mindfulness)
i believe that's when i Officially AWAKENED
I became a student of zen Buddhism.
You could take it up and still be a Christian or Muslim or Buddhist ........etc., and i thought How Fucking Wonderful is that!!?
zen provides me with a framework without limiting me and i get to fill in the blanks with anything!!
I kind of sensed You and me are similar in feel and thinking.........now it's beginning to make sense
Keep on with that Beautiful OPEN mind (mindfulness)
11th Jun 2020 10:50pm
You have so many to read I thought I would jump back near the beginning. I really love the succubus theme and this is a great expression of lust, desire, and gratification; that hook has definitely been set. :)
11th Jun 2020 11:32pm
When we look at one's work from the beginning we often see a progression, sometimes improvement, as well, in the ink.
i like it because it feels as though i am on the journey too.
You final phrase comment caused me to smile --
thank You
appreciate the read and share
i like it because it feels as though i am on the journey too.
You final phrase comment caused me to smile --
thank You
appreciate the read and share
Anonymous
30th Mar 2021 7:40pm
Tallen I loved reading about your succubus dreaming, felt like you were indulging on the astral plain. I like reading about dark and light. Lots of temptation and desire in this. Really good
Gwen
Gwen
30th Mar 2021 7:48pm
You Honor me, Gwen with Your share and RL add
My Succubus, visits still, from time to time
My Succubus, visits still, from time to time
