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manipulation burnout
why live under a thumb
doesn't rub me right
fuck me for wanting to be held
since u said im a queen
guess u thought
u had other cards in hand
ah sweet
my little overtime
u overplayed
doesn't rub me right
fuck me for wanting to be held
since u said im a queen
guess u thought
u had other cards in hand
ah sweet
my little overtime
u overplayed
Published 20th Oct 2018
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20th Oct 2018 2:38pm
ouch!!
smart fools galore...fallacy....or plain stupid
approaching thinking...i've got this...
loved the brevity
and the delivery AG
smart fools galore...fallacy....or plain stupid
approaching thinking...i've got this...
loved the brevity
and the delivery AG
21st Oct 2018 00:06am
21st Oct 2018 10:57am
you are right it's one tired-ass cliche. dunno how to do. maybe delete.
the quality is just not there
the quality is just not there
22nd Oct 2018 5:17pm
it's better to churn anything out rather than nothing. least you're giving the quality a chance to come
21st Oct 2018 4:37am
Anonymous
4th Nov 2018 3:21am
i think of the concept of "cutting losses".
This was a very smart write, i enjoyed it as it really ties in with current experiences.
This was a very smart write, i enjoyed it as it really ties in with current experiences.
