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Boxing in the Icebox
Frost embeds my lips
Silence is deadly
No need for poison
I am a far greater enemy
Your rage fire met with quips
And monotone medley
Your only sin
Was trusting me
Your cheeks rose hips
as you gaze over debris
I’m a wolf in sheepskin
Wouldn’t you agree?
Your hatred drips
at my passivity
Ice queen enters in —
You should have let me be.
Silence is deadly
No need for poison
I am a far greater enemy
Your rage fire met with quips
And monotone medley
Your only sin
Was trusting me
Your cheeks rose hips
as you gaze over debris
I’m a wolf in sheepskin
Wouldn’t you agree?
Your hatred drips
at my passivity
Ice queen enters in —
You should have let me be.
Published 20th Oct 2018
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20th Oct 2018 3:05am
Nice
Your cheeks rose hips
as you gaze over debris
I’m a wolf in sheepskin
Wouldn’t you agree?
Deep, medafor!
LOL Im shaking!
Your cheeks rose hips
as you gaze over debris
I’m a wolf in sheepskin
Wouldn’t you agree?
Deep, medafor!
LOL Im shaking!
21st Oct 2018 00:24am
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- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
21st Oct 2018 3:05am
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21st Oct 2018 3:35am
You always give great feedback, yes it was a touch obvious that some of the artistry was lost in the process. Thanks for always giving me constructive criticism, that’s what I need to improve my art :-)
22nd Oct 2018 3:02am
Now there's a warning. A woman scorned & all that. I like this ice cold write.
