Letting go

Killer last stanza

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Thank you for your revew!
I appreciate it very much

Butterflies from the jar ... splendid write my poetess ...

Thank you, my dear friend! Always glad you comed by ! :)

Beautiful write! Let go of your sadness, Duchess. I’ll take the pain away.

Your kind words make me smile! :) Thank you so much, my dear friend!

Butterflies released from the jar...is a beautiful line.
Uplifting poem Selena.

Dark Sun.

Thank you, my dear friend... In future, I will surely try to write more lines like that! I love your review, always unique.

First of all, thank you, Rascal, for your generous comment!
I am really honored and grateful you took your time to read and make review of my poem!
I'm really open-minded for any suggestion and criticism! So, right now I'm going to correct the places you have highlighted, I think you're absolutely right. I'm sincerly grateful for your help, my English is not so advanced, so I'm aware I make some mistakes. Your suggestion is very valuable for me, because I can correct my poem and move up my writing style. And thank you so much for every word of praise you said! It makes me very motivated to continue with writing. I'm surprised you have so high opinion for my writing...Well, your support it's a big boost for me! Thank you from the heart. Best regards,
Selena

Very nice write Selena thanks for sharing

Thank you Ralph Tamez, for reading and for your kind review!