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The Taste of Sugar
He sits down
next to me
and smiles.
I lower my head
in reply.
This does not
dissuade him
as he ask
"Is there meaning to life?"
From there,
the conversation lags
as he goes
on and on
about the absence
of objective truth
and how life is
ultimately meaningless.
I intently focus
on his mouth
all the while envisioning
how it would
Taste on mine.
he continues to speak,
but I can no
longer bare it.
I put my finger
against his lips,
holding it there
for a few seconds
and say, "If I kiss you,
would you promise
to shut up?"
He pauses, barely able
to get another word out
before my lips
are on his.
His mouth yields
and our tongues meet.
he tastes of sugar
and the sweetness
overtakes me as
I dissolve into him.
He presses his body
against mine,
moving his hand,
up my thigh
reaching for the
hidden place
no one dares to go.
He makes the journey,
feeling what his kisses
have done to me.
His puts his hand
to my mouth
as I drink
the holy water
from his fingers.
A smile breaks
across my face
as I coyly say,
"That's my answer
to your question."
next to me
and smiles.
I lower my head
in reply.
This does not
dissuade him
as he ask
"Is there meaning to life?"
From there,
the conversation lags
as he goes
on and on
about the absence
of objective truth
and how life is
ultimately meaningless.
I intently focus
on his mouth
all the while envisioning
how it would
Taste on mine.
he continues to speak,
but I can no
longer bare it.
I put my finger
against his lips,
holding it there
for a few seconds
and say, "If I kiss you,
would you promise
to shut up?"
He pauses, barely able
to get another word out
before my lips
are on his.
His mouth yields
and our tongues meet.
he tastes of sugar
and the sweetness
overtakes me as
I dissolve into him.
He presses his body
against mine,
moving his hand,
up my thigh
reaching for the
hidden place
no one dares to go.
He makes the journey,
feeling what his kisses
have done to me.
His puts his hand
to my mouth
as I drink
the holy water
from his fingers.
A smile breaks
across my face
as I coyly say,
"That's my answer
to your question."
Author's Note
The first part of the poem is a conversation I had at a party. The rest, my response, is what I was thinking when he was talking.
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Re. The Taste of Sugar
18th Oct 2018 7:01am
Re. The Taste of Sugar
18th Oct 2018 12:26pm
How many times have we thought about shutting someone up with our mouth? I really like this piece, CharlotteMae. You walk a fine line between innocence and hunger, and it pulled me in. Nicely done :)
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Re: Re. The Taste of Sugar
18th Oct 2018 4:38pm
So many times lol. One day I hope to do it. And thank you for that comment. That's the exact balance I was hoping to achieve. :)
Re. The Taste of Sugar
18th Oct 2018 6:07pm
I really enjoyed that healthy dose of fantasy that compliments reality so well.
Wonderful.
Wonderful.
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23rd Oct 2018 4:13pm
Re. The Taste of Sugar
19th Oct 2018 10:00pm
Re. The Taste of Sugar
20th Oct 2018 2:39pm
Wonderful ... flowing ... great erotica my poetess ... such innocence ... takes me back ...
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23rd Oct 2018 4:14pm
Re. The Taste of Sugar
23rd Oct 2018 4:03pm
Wonderful, short ,and packs an "in the moment" punch. well penned. jaw dropping good.
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23rd Oct 2018 4:14pm
Re. The Taste of Sugar
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 10:15pm
Joyful, playful and controlled! Perfect! Bravo CM!!
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Re. The Taste of Sugar
24th Oct 2018 4:46am
Re. The Taste of Sugar
25th Oct 2018 3:08am
You display a subtlety, a moderation in your works, that is rather prodigious for someone your age. I always admire this in your works. Sweet sensuality here, your metaphors are warm and alive. Enjoyed this.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re. The Taste of Sugar
30th Oct 2018 4:47pm
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Re. The Taste of Sugar
31st Oct 2018 3:27am
Certainly does not seem like the "awkward" persona you described yourself as!. :-)
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Re. The Taste of Sugar
2nd Nov 2018 5:19pm
Sounds like the start of something wonderful! Perhaps the sharing of Nature's nectar will go both ways as hands and tongues and mouths grapple with the philosophy of passion instead of things better left unsaid...
An absolutely deliciously mouth watering inspiration you have penned Charlotte Mae!
JJ
An absolutely deliciously mouth watering inspiration you have penned Charlotte Mae!
JJ
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