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Lost Love
Fading water colours
on Canvas
Sepia coloured memories
Of love lost
remembered kisses
loving touches
promises
breathy whispers
of I love You's
Deep down under now
Six feet beneath me
marked by a stone
In remembrance of you
my husband
on Canvas
Sepia coloured memories
Of love lost
remembered kisses
loving touches
promises
breathy whispers
of I love You's
Deep down under now
Six feet beneath me
marked by a stone
In remembrance of you
my husband
Published 3rd Nov 2011
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3rd Nov 2011 10:08pm
in a competition within this portal that I want to share with you. Thank you for reading.
3rd Nov 2011 10:44pm
Poignantly beautiful dedication..to your husband may he rest in peace..much love Crim
3rd Nov 2011 10:47pm
He rests. Thank you dear Crim for commenting. Its comments like yours that gives encouragement to aspirants like me.
3rd Nov 2011 10:48pm
you are a beautifully gifted writer with a lot of heart from what i've read of you..much love Crim :)
Anonymous
4th Nov 2011 4:08am
Loved it, Grace. Pure and talented is your pen.
4th Nov 2011 5:40am
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4th Nov 2011 7:39am
What a lovely dedication - he must have been a very special person. The purity of each choice of word is testament to your wonderfull talent and delightfull writing.
Well done Grace.
Well done Grace.
4th Nov 2011 8:37am
Thank you Alip. For a brief moment, a water lily growing out of the muck was loved.
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