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Take All Of Me
I lay here naked
not just bared skin
but with an open heart and soul
spread wide across your bed
begging you to take all
take time to feel each touch
feel not just my naked flesh
beneath your fingertips
let my heartbeat set the mood
relax your trembling nerves
lay your head upon my breast
listen to our luv song
forever sang for eternity
from my heart to yours
never shall it skip a beat
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
not just bared skin
but with an open heart and soul
spread wide across your bed
begging you to take all
take time to feel each touch
feel not just my naked flesh
beneath your fingertips
let my heartbeat set the mood
relax your trembling nerves
lay your head upon my breast
listen to our luv song
forever sang for eternity
from my heart to yours
never shall it skip a beat
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 16th Oct 2018
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 4:56am
That's just beautiful Flowergirl!!
Are you really that fantastic, young lady??
So sweet! I loved that!!
Matthew.
Are you really that fantastic, young lady??
So sweet! I loved that!!
Matthew.
17th Oct 2018 3:56am
Hey Matthew.......you’re words make me blush.......thank you for the blessing of thinking I’m young......tilting my pen to you with respect......honored by the RL add on......appreciate you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Oct 2018 5:26am
17th Oct 2018 3:59am
Awe Rose.......you’ve touched me by your simple praise.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs from my heart to yours xo :)
16th Oct 2018 3:45pm
Your love never ceases to amaze me. So much to give! God has truly gifted you with it.
"And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love."
"And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love."
17th Oct 2018 4:03am
My precious friend......TIG thank you for your continued encouragement and support......I’m very blessed and thankful the God crossed our life paths.......I’ve learned so much about Him thru you being such a witness for Him.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Oct 2018 1:22am
That first tercet bares it all, Flowergirl. There is naked, and then there is truly naked. . .
17th Oct 2018 4:05am
Yes Ahavati.......you’re right.......you can be naked in many ways offering your luv to another........thank you for always sharing your wisdom and insight within your comments and writes.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Oct 2018 9:57pm
A truly inspiring poem, Flower. As always, I luv it, these lines in particular:
relax your trembling nerves
lay your head upon my breast
listen to our luv song
Your style is sweet and tender as usual. You leave me feeling more lifted and serene every time I read you. My gratitude...
relax your trembling nerves
lay your head upon my breast
listen to our luv song
Your style is sweet and tender as usual. You leave me feeling more lifted and serene every time I read you. My gratitude...
19th Oct 2018 3:09am
Awe Crow.......it’s fantastic to see you back.......I missed you! Thank you as always for the very encouraging response......you’re one of the reasons I keep posting here.......you’re a precious friend to me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Oct 2018 11:10pm
19th Oct 2018 3:19am
Hey Kumar.......thank you so much for smiling upon my ink......I’m glad you felt warm reading it.......appreciate your visit......purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Oct 2018 3:30pm
You had me at the title and the first few lines!
I lay here naked
not just bared skin
but with an open heart and soul
I can relate and enjoyed. :)
I lay here naked
not just bared skin
but with an open heart and soul
I can relate and enjoyed. :)
23rd Oct 2018 1:56am
Hey Passion........thrilled you enjoyed this one.......nice you can relate.......honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)
